eleven; mystery

Guild Wars ( ♔ ) — It's More Than Just a War
Mist went to her house to visit her daughters. When she came in, they weren't there, but there was a note.
"Umma, if you come here, you will find out that we are not here. A man came here and told us to go to Yui. He told us that he would hurt you if we didn't. Love, Mei."
"Oh no..." Mist held the note with shivering hands, she clutched it and then it got ripped up into several pieces.
"What do you want from my daughters..."
She quickly left the house and went back to the guild. The doors flung open and the members were surprised that they didn't break. Everyone stared at the master. They sensed that she was really angry.
"Who here can teleport?" She firmly said. Her voice was really serious.
"I-I can, master..." Ailee stuttered and hesitantly raised her hand.
Everyone was scared. They've never seen Mist this angry. They wondered what she was so angry about.
"Teleport me to Yui, guild Stormlight. Right now." Ailee quickly walked to Mist and almost instantly, they disappeared.
She appeared right in front of the guild doors and Haeun was there to see it. She felt the great magic power of Mist and decided not to take action. She tried not to have eye contact but Ailee was staring. Haeun couldn't help but stare back and then the stares slowly became glares.
"Go back." Mist told Ailee and she nodded, leaving Haeun staring at nothing.
Haeun turned her attention to Mist.
"I am none of your business. Take your eyes off of me."
Haeun's eyes widened and fear built up inside of her. She quickly looked away.
The doors of Stormlight burst open. Literally. One of them broke off and slammed into the ground. The guild members stood up brought their weapons, ready to protect their guild.
Rain also stood up from his seat, putting down his drink on the table. Some of the members attacked and a wall appeared and slapped them away.
Mist approached Rain and the ground was shaking a bit.
"Where are they?!" She yelled at them and she looked into his eyes. "Where are Kei and Mei?!!"
Rain froze.
"I don't know what you're talking about but let's take this somewhere else." He said.
"Fine." Mist grabbed Rain and dragged him out of the guild building, leaving the whole guild clueless. Mist found her way into an alley and pinned Rain to the wall.
"Now tell me. Where. Are. My. Daughters."
He grabbed Mist's hand and stopped her from shoving his body into the wall. "I saw them running. But I don't know where they are now."
"Stop lying! You told them to go here or else you would hurt me."
Even though they were in the darkness, Rain could still see the anger in Mist's eyes. He felt her magic power getting bigger and bigger.
"I didn't. I don't know what you're talking about. I would never threaten to hurt you. You know that."
When Mist heard those words, she let go of Rain and turn her back on him.
"I just want my daughters."
"Don't be so possessive." He looked at her back, he could still see the blue of her robe in the darkness.
"They're my daughters too."
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_shelly
#1
Chapter 20: You can use mine, I don't mind I love this story. I'll send you the link in a little bit
jokerkkhe22
#2
Chapter 20: Oh my god I just saw your update! Ah its sad that you're not going to continue it here anymore, but turning it into a comic series! Oh my god oh my god! If you still want my character, you're free to morph my character to your liking! http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/285468
aniyababo
#3
Chapter 20: hi there! and aw, it's sad that you won't be updating this here anymore-- but it's down right cool of you to want to turn it into a comics/graphic novel! anyway, i'm alright with you using my character! if you still want him, that is OTL
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/279464
Table_cookiE
#4
Chapter 20: You're alive!! ^-^ I don't mind if you use my character if you're going to pick it to keep.
Here's the link again bellow:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/276171
yodaismystyle
#5
Chapter 20: oh gosh! you're alive! haha. i don't mind if you'll use my character--if i'm going to be picked.
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/275418
yodaismystyle
#6
I miss this...
-xmunstrr
#7
Chapter 18: omg two updates~!omg. i'm dying at hara and danyoung. that was hilarious. tbh, i'd be pretty scared too if someone threatened me as badly as hara did to danyoung. lol. an angry, pregnant hara is someone i do not want to deal with. and minam. aw. the cute little moment he had with the mystery girl. don't fight it minam, don't fight the feeling ( omg, what am i even writing? ).

poor daehyun. he's spent all his time worrying about jino. ( where in the world is jino sandiego? ) aw, he shouldn't be so hard on himself, the poor bby. jino's gunna come back safe and sound...( well i hope. for daehyun's sake ). i wonder what mist is planning...hm. omg, yass. more hara and danyoung. lol at the group's reaction to the pregnancy news (especially youngjae omfg.) youngjae's a bit too eager to replace hara, lol and maeum's "that's cray, qrl." i'm cry.

anyways, thanks for the updates. they were fab. <3
yodaismystyle
#8
tao and luhan, first thing i saw. poor daehyun if i were you i kicked those two of out the room but i pity daehyun and mist, i know it's hard for them. i hope they could see him asap so daehyun could get his rest and stop from worrying. it is hard to keep a promise and once you broke it, guilt will eat you alive. Danyong and Hara, i just can't help but fret about those two. Oops the guild master just came in hahaha tsk! they were loud -.-

i did not actually expect you to have an update and I was so impatient to read the next chapter this past few days but thankfully you updated. I really don't mind you having a slow update as long as you still think of updating it but it is still nice seeing a frequent update from you since the story is already starting and everyone cannot wait for the guild war. so it is up to you. i know it bothers alot when you handles other stories but you can combine the two - short/mid but fast update and slow update :D
Transparent
#9
Chapter 18: Yay this story updated again! :D
Thanks for updating twice too. It was awesome to be able to read both of them at once. xD
Mmmm... I think short/med updates would be good. Then the readers won't be overwhelmed with all the new stuff at once? I'm not sure. Haha. xD
_shelly
#10
Chapter 18: Poor, Jino wonder why they took him? I hope they find him alive and well