Goodnight Moon

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"Do you feel us fallin' ?"  Luhan said. 

Foreword

Hooray! Hooray! I finally made another drabble!! and yes, it is still HunHan. Idk, the plot and those two just clicked (well for me it did).
It was their pairing that popped into my head first so yeah. And this also deviates from the norms of my stories -- something to freshen things up again :))

This was inspired by the song Goodnight Moon by Go Radio. The song's really sweet and all. You can check it out here.
I suggest you do, the song's good! :)

Have fun reading! ♥

 

p.s.

I actually wanted to post this yesterday, but then again, I got sick and stuff, so yeah.

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fSHINeEXO #1
Chapter 1: ♥️♥️
minsoph74 #2
Chapter 1: They're so beautiful together!
Macabreia #3
WAE DID YOU MAKE IT SO SHORT?!
HunHan stories shouldn't have one-shots especially those amazing as this!
I am freaking crying this is so beautiful <3
muoiix3 #4
Oh gosh Hunhan forever.
Kifunyan #5
to short!
i want more! /slap!

oh luhan...
i like that sehun have a deep feel for luhan...keep silent but always watching his lover secretly,can't release his eyes from luhan's figure...
that so sweet i think...
mshmlo #6
"Do you feel us fallin'?" <<-- THIS LINE OMG. It's so off the hook! Thanks for making me want to ship HunHan even more.
Sehunny #7
I'm falling too......
oh this is beautiful......
himrj02 #8
and i'm falling to..
to your beautiful fics!
omg this is so... perfect..
every words make a goosebumps to me.
i love this!
thank you
Tinywings #9
Aish aish cute~~~~~~ :D

It's not exactly a drablle anymore when it's this length keke (:p) but aside from that, it was well written and all :D I listened to the song while reading, and it indeed fitted perfectly (well, of course, you based it on the song, right?? XD). I like how there was nothing spectacular that happened, just two people who lie on the rooftop and watch the sky... :') I don't know how to describe it, but it feels pleasant, peaceful, and it conveys what you want to convey just as clearly :D

Just a little thing. I think this could have been a litle shorter to have more impact on the reader. This is solely my opinion! But I just think that if you had made it shorter, the essence would have been more visible and all :D

But in sum, thank you for a good read! :D It's really sweet~! :D
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