It's Actually Been You

Description

This is for the I'm You're Man [Writing Contest] 

I hope it turns out good, and please enjoy my story!! 

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Lee Jinshim is a normal 16 year old girl...well as normal as she can be. Growing up with three brothers isn't really easy, but somehow she makes it look like a simple task.

Lee Junho: Oldest brother, 19

 

 

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Lee Kiseob: Second older brother, 18

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Lee Jinshim: Middle child, and only girl! 16

 

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Lee Chunji: Only younger brother 14

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CREDIT FOR MY LOVELY POSTER GOES TO 143BIGBANG @ MIDNIGHT GRAPHICS ^_*

Foreword

When a new boy in school that has Lee Jinshim's heart racing starts hanging out with her group of friends will she handle herself? She has no experience with boys expect for the one she calls her best friend Do Kyungsoo. He's willing to give her that push to make her happy, but is all of this making him happy? With the help of Kyungsoo maybe she'll have a chance with the boy of her dreams.

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Firado
#1
Kyungsoo so romantic >.<
what will happen if shim know he likes her? Can't wait~
SkyLeafy
#2
Aww omg you're amazing
StrawberryBoo
#3
Kyungsoo is jealous~~~ kekeke>:D
Aigoo, I wanna know more about Kai! What's up with his family?! And yeesh, Jonghyun talking about studying like it's a fun thing..e_e
Anyways, can't wait to read more!<3
Moonstargazer
#4
Gosh, I really like reading Kyungsoo's POV. It was soo cute I can't help but smile like an idiot while reading it. It was just a little sad that Shim kept on bringing up Kai in their conversation but hey it makes things more interesting plus it brings Kyungsoo cuteness out :D

Good job on this chapter!!!! :D
Not that the story was bad, but I cannot help but notice that it is improving and the same goes with how you write too! Keep up the good work!!!!^~^

Thanks for the update!!!:D
Firado
#5
Poor kyungsoo :(
this story remind me to my past
hope jinshim n kyungsoo will be together then
SkyLeafy
#6
Oh wait she is going to be with kyungsoo, because of the title!!
SkyLeafy
#7
Aww kyungsoo... I want him with shim!!
StrawberryBoo
#8
Aigoo~~~ Kai's so cute!>//<
StrawberryBoo
#9
Aigoo~ Ugh. Eli that .D:<
Kyungsoo's so funny~! Kekekeke