Teaser #2

The Eternal Battle

Terror had never been a concern of hers. She had always felt safe in the sanctity of her own home. Now, it seemed even the walls had turned against her. The shadows scared her, and she could no longer trust the deceiving cloak of the night.

Never had the eyes of so many intimidated her. It had been quite the contrary; they were intimidated by her mere presence. Perhaps it was the shifting planets, but she could see the resentment in their eyes; the violence that lurked beneath their steely gaze.

Her fall had been far from that of grace. The blazing fire burned behind her lids, the smoke smothered her lungs. Angry cries and raging howls rang in her ears, never leaving, always whispering. They were always reminding her of how filthy she was, how unfit.

The trust that seemed so steadfast between her and her personal servant crumbled beneath the uproar. His betrayal slaughtered her. He had been merciless, unyielding, as he held the dagger to her skin. The scar never faded; a constant reminder of the fear that pounded through her veins.

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pinkaichu
#1
hey :)
this wont get updated, right?
I'm clearing up my subs list of inactive fics, so it'd be nice if you let me know if this fic is dead or not :)
pinkaichu
#2
Ah, this is getting more epic with every chapter <3<br />
I really really love how you include a quote at the beginning of every chapter :) I looove quotes. I even have a notebook where I write down the ones I like. Here are a few, maybe you'll find some of them useful :)<br />
"Every man dies. Not every man really lives." -William Wallace<br />
"Fill what's empty. Empty what's full. Scratch where it itches." -Alice R. Longworth<br />
"Life does not cease to be funny when people die any more than it ceases to be serious when people laugh." -George B. Shaw<br />
"Clouds come floating into my life no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky." -R. Tagore<br />
"Don't get mad, get even." -Joseph P. Kennedy<br />
"Men talk of killing time, while time slowly kills them." - Dion Boucicault<br />
"“Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass. It’s about dancing in the rain..!” -author unknown<br />
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waiting for more updates ;)
james_maknae18 #3
you're writing is really great!<br />
I'm curious to when all of the characthers will meet each other
oxygenbubble
#4
Soo many updates!!<br />
Wow this is wonderful stuff. I can't to see what's next, and I'm more than curious to see how you're gonna combine everyone's story together. =D
LeeYEG
#5
Wow. I liked your updates! I also found mine!! Can wait for the next one and the actual story, when the characters are all posted!!
Mistral
#6
so many new chapters, its heaven xD Yes, it takes long to give pieces about all characters, so it will be more hard to make them intract, but than it means that this story will be long, I vote for that <3 <br />
And I found myself :P (btw, thank you for letting me levitate the guy instead of carrying, that whould have been hard Lol)<br />
And the quotes are great!
silvrwngz #7
Amazing!! I loved it!!<br />
Your new found source of inspiration is glorious!!
ShinHyeJin #8
weeeeeeee!!! finally an update no.... scratch that.... 5 updates!!!! woooohoo! and damn they are good!!!!!! woah!!! can't wait for the rest!!! good luck!!!