An Elegy Of Love

Description

I gaze at the heavens but with unseeing eyes Hoping to find some solace

Some salve to soothe the pain  Among the stars and the skies

 

Love Once so warm and forgiving

Has now turned so demanding Forsaken by one who has cared the most

 

Each day starts in a stupor Blank looks arouse curiosity

How the heart yearns for just a sweet Hello From the phone that

Remains unrelentingly silent

 

The night’s morose blanket Dark dense and lonely

Trying to smother the heart’s turmoil But giving up completely

 

Life must go on so they say Friends offer comfort to pass the day

Working with a frenzy distracting the mind To the shattered heart however

There’s no such thing as mind over matter

 

Food turns to ashes in the mouth The body doesn’t seem to care

All that are needed is nicotine to sustain And alcohol to dull the pain

 

The seasons may come and go Can such love become

A distant memory Tell that to the mind it may agree

The heart’s anguish tell another story

 

This elegy has to end Having unleashed tears that blind

If I were to write my epitaph here and now

Herein lies a woman who loved and lost And who died with a broken heart.

Foreword

I'm not a noob when it comes to composing fictions. I began writing novels/poetry when I was in high school. and back in college I used to be the editor-in-chief of our University paper.this is my first fiction about Khuntoria, well this is quite different from the usual happily-ever-after- love story, this one has the sad/melancholic theme. I hope you all had a little time to spare on this fic.thank you :D

Deep Meaning of Elegy & Love:

El-e-gy [el-i-jee]:

1

: a poem in elegiac couplets

2

a : a song or poem expressing sorrow or lamentation especially for one who is dead

b : something (as a speech) resembling such a song or poem

3

a : a pensive or reflective poem that is usually nostalgic or melancholy

b : a short pensive musical composition


Love [Eros] :

-vb

1.  to have a great attachment to and affection for

2.  to have passionate desire, longing, and feelings for

3.  someone to be in love with


Elegy + Love = Lamentation of the heart (death of love)


 

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luv_chogifam #1
update soon please...
gummibear13 #2
Geez.. I've got chills after reading this & I can't help but tear up. Vic is amazing in this fic I love sad love story keep it up unnie. Let's chat up on facebook.
hunnierage17 #3
wow, this is a great story. I love how you wrote it in such a poetic way. I feel Vic's pain already. I'm excited for the next coming chapters.