After this I should think nothing of falling down stairs...

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I was sitting in class and this cute story came up to be soo enjoy <(^.^)> ! THANK YOU FOR READING AND PLEASE GIVE ME TIPS ..

Foreword

ENJOY AND IT IS MY FIRST FIC SOO PLEASE ENJOY & THANK YOU AGAIN FOR READING <(^.^)>!

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AyaniELF #1
Chapter 3: YOU UPDATED?! O.O it's been over a year pabo! You should write more!
Beautiful_Wonderland #2
Unnie let me just put this out there .. i know where you live ...and you have creepy pudding smile >.<
AyaniELF #3
So cheesy >//< What is with people and cheesiness today *pudding smile*
Beautiful_Wonderland #4
Thank you i will keep this in mind :] and again thank you
BlissfulDreams #5
A small tip would be when you have dialogue each time a person talks it should start a new line. It should not be one full paragraph with three people talking. This helps the reader who is talking, and makes it so that you do not need to use the coloring for the people, especially when more get added the coloring will get confusing. Cute so far though. I like CNU so good start.
Beautiful_Wonderland #6
aish! Unnie leave me alone lol now im blushing >.< !
AyaniELF #7
YAHH! Update more :3
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