Before The Dawn

Description

 

Title:  Before The Dawn

Genre:  Drama, Angst, Romance

Length:  One-shot

Paring:  Kai&Luhan | Kaihan

Summary: "The darkest hour is just before the dawn"

Foreword

 

Just stop hesitating, okay?

Just tightly take a hold of my heart

Love is a dazzling ray of light

The cold moonlight, close your eyes

If it’s not me, it’s another man

If this is a line from a drama

Dry out the bar

I’ll exchange your love with pain

Baby don’t cry tonight

When the dark night lights up again

Baby don’t cry tonight

Just pretend that it didn’t happen

You will never turn into sea foam

Did you not know?

So baby don’t cry, cry

My love will protect you and will not let you go

 

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Author's Note:

As you probably have noticed by now, this story is based on their song Baby, don't cry and Little Mermaid the original version. Yes, I am in love with that song, if I can marry it I will XD. I didn't wanna title it Baby don't cry coz there are probably a lot of fanfics out there with that title. but yh, it is based on the song.

I'm not sure if anyone's gonna like it but I hope someone does haaa~ 

I'll upload the story in a bit! =D<3

 

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moonrakki #1
Chapter 1: ;A; aw i didn't think this was going to happen at all...i really thought kai was going to stop luhan from fading away but it was already too late...my heart;;
GalitaMiina #2
Chapter 1: Oh my... U succesfully make me crying, again...
:-(
But yeah i love their love for each others.. Live with the other or not at all.. I know luhan wii be sad if jongin die for him, also jongin will be sad if luhan dissappear thats why i like u authornim to let the time won againts them.. But would u make a sequel for this lukai? Jebaaaaal...
*puppy eyes my ultimate weapon*
Pliz pliz pliz pliz..
-hugs n kisses-
zhang_han #3
Chapter 1: Wow. Just wow.. Heartbreakingly wonderful
Rosasaur #4
Chapter 1: Omg what a twist to the Little Mermaid ;~; Poor kai and luhan :((( and gah love baby don't cry
Minspro #5
Oh dear god...mine vision has blurred and my keyboard is drenched in my lukai tears.
My heart is breaking by the fact that they were too late, but in a way ( I know this sounds kind bad...) I think that they both would've preferred to have lived with the other or not at all ~ such was their love.
But yes, I've always been a fan of the original version of a Little mermaid (I have a copy of the children's book that's practically ancient! XD) but I just loved the plot and the story in general. Even if it left me as a blubbering mess.
Another thing, your writing too, was brilliant. Poetic and descriptive ~ really well done <3
helloimrayn #6
OMFG IM LEAKING RN;;;;;_______;;;;;
It's too beautiful omfg
elilar #7
LOVELY ;~~~~; you conveyed the pain and the beauty and luhan's inhumane prettiness and kai and the mermaid and the beautiful killing and the sea foam and and and ;~~~~; let me love you { }
chocobada #8
this is just beautiful omg T.T.. i love how you describe luhan as the definition of beauty.. ;~;

write more kailu/kaihan/lukai pleaseee!!~~~ <3
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