Candy-umma`s OC hospital

Description

Hey there!

As you might notice I haven`t wrote any stories, but I could call myself a quite good OC creator. So I`m here to help you with your OCs! ^^

And to those who don`t know: OC stand for "original character" meaning a character you have created by yourself.

So the point in this story is to review your OCs and help to make them better if needed. And to stop the Mary Sue population from growing! Just send me a profile by PM and tell me do you want me to just to review your character or also tell how to make him/her better. I will post the reviews to this story, so people can learn about characters.

I can also write about common clichès and other things from reguest. And also help you authors who are creating apply stories to choose the best characters to your stories.

So just subscribe and PM me!

Foreword

Rules:

1. Don`t bash me.

2. Understand that english isn`t my first language. I might use weird choice of words and my writing might have many mistakes in it. Sorry, but you need to just deal with it.^^

 

 

Services this hospital provides:

*Diagnoses

*Treaments

*Check-ups

*Information

*Examples

*And lots and lots of ranting

 

The awesome poster is by

❝ Pure Design ❞

I got my poster so extremely fast that it`s almost abnormal! I really recommend this shop!

 

And all you writers should check these stories!

♣ heartfelt | writing tips | review ♣

Losing Faith in Humanity, One Story at a Time

These authors say what needs be said! Don`t get offended!

 

 

 

 

Author's Thoughts
CandyFreak
I edited the current chapter 4 a bit.
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Cdulzzang #1
Chapter 7: Thank you I'm going to write a new story with a oc and this really helped. I know my current oc (Seo Kiyoung) is the best but she's decent and fits my current stories character also I don't have a computer and have been using my phone to write. Does anyone know how to upload pics from phones?
-strawberryshortcake #2
Chapter 5: OMG IKR>.<
but sometimes its so hard to find a bad singing/rapping/dancing clips u,u
-strawberryshortcake #3
Chapter 4: ikr>.<
i hate it when people write rival as the mean girl
queenka at their high school time and stuff
and now as rival too tsk tsk
sunnyonline_ #4
Chapter 2: Yeah! I'm a Malaysian and I can speak Manglish (Malay + English) very fluent! (lol, like korean, Engrish!) I'm just semi-fluent for english. I can't say it probably but it's better when I'm writing
-Jester #5
Chapter 2: I agree. It really annoys me when people make The ocs be like a super idol. Being realistic is the way to go. This is really useful info. I hope other people will read this story also. Would you like me to help advertise your story?
hexagon #6
Chapter 2: this is really convenient /nod
i will seek your help later ! ouo
-strawberryshortcake #7
Chapter 2: sometimes it happen to me too :3
but i love being simple tbh
in language, relationship with idols and talentxD
being realistic is one of my favorite things in making OC^^
its like giving my OC a life
Daesunggie #8
this seems to be quite the unique shop...^^
i will sub for future references! (:
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