Chapter 8: I wanna read the story that had the Stockholm Syndrome in it now.

Chapter 22: You used the word '' exactly 201 times in this fic. I counted. The most in a chapter being 21 and the least, 1.

And yeah, I whine to my friend all the time about my awkward dialogue and how it's just not realistic. I read that you shouldn't write how people normally talk or else you'd get a load of that doesn't make sense. Write dialogue in a way that's for story (?).

Chapter 5: I apologize, but I must disagree. In fact, the second person narrative is widely enjoyed in literature. Although it is hard to write, it can result in something beautiful when executed well. Heck, one of my favorite novels is written in the second person point of view. I understand that a lot of these so-called "you" fics on AFF are a load of crap, and I feel sad because they are butchering the second person narrative. However, I do not believe you should immediate judge a fic by the narrative/point of view it takes.

Chapter 20: "these plots are so overused i actually think it's getting cliche to rant about them."

this is so much win in just one simple sentence.

Chapter 1: Great rant on OCs and Mary Sues. Like you I think those are annoying. I came here to read about people/idol I know. I dont want to read about how they fcuking hooked up with some perfect girl. LOL. But sadly, this site is filled with more than half of those fics.

Chapter 19: I just read all of this in one go and I have to say, it was hilarious! I'm in a really bad mood right now and a rant like this is just what I needed. Thank you!

I especially enjoyed the chapter about M-Preg, because in my opinion that is the stupidest thing ever. And I hate kids, too.