The most important thing when doing an OC is simple.

Candy-umma`s OC hospital

Use logic and make it realistic.

 

I cannot accent enought how important it is. When OC isn`t realistic is basically automatically a Mary Sue. He/She is supposed to be a REAL person in REAL world.

Make yourself questions. Could this happen? If this happens how it effects he/she? Is he/she too perfect? Can he/she actually have all these skills? Why can he/she speak this many languages fluently? I think most OC creators should ask themselves these kind of questions. I can imagine how much better many OCs would be after that.

He`s one example of unrealistic feature in OC. This one`s sadly common.

OC is pure Korean. He/She has never lived abroad or went to international school. He/She speaks fluent English.

Excuse me. WHAT? Why does he/she speak fluent English tell me? It`s true that this isn`t completely impossible. This actually applies to me, almost. I speak good but definedly not fluent English. I learned for example by readind fanfictions in English. So the OC still need REASON why he/she speaks fluent English. And why he/she has to have good English? Most kpop idols have horrible English and it even makes them adorable!

Another examples are OC having way too many talents or being very talented in too many different things (like being super smart, having amazing voice and dance skills), OC having many close idol friends (from different companies) with no explanation and OC having a sob story past with it not affecting his/her personality in any way.

Using logic while making OC is really important. Making OC realistic is even more important! you believe me!

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Cdulzzang #1
Chapter 7: Thank you I'm going to write a new story with a oc and this really helped. I know my current oc (Seo Kiyoung) is the best but she's decent and fits my current stories character also I don't have a computer and have been using my phone to write. Does anyone know how to upload pics from phones?
-strawberryshortcake
#2
Chapter 5: OMG IKR>.<
but sometimes its so hard to find a bad singing/rapping/dancing clips u,u
-strawberryshortcake
#3
Chapter 4: ikr>.<
i hate it when people write rival as the mean girl
queenka at their high school time and stuff
and now as rival too tsk tsk
sunnyonline_
#4
Chapter 2: Yeah! I'm a Malaysian and I can speak Manglish (Malay + English) very fluent! (lol, like korean, Engrish!) I'm just semi-fluent for english. I can't say it probably but it's better when I'm writing
-Jester
#5
Chapter 2: I agree. It really annoys me when people make The ocs be like a super idol. Being realistic is the way to go. This is really useful info. I hope other people will read this story also. Would you like me to help advertise your story?
hexagon #6
Chapter 2: this is really convenient /nod
i will seek your help later ! ouo
-strawberryshortcake
#7
Chapter 2: sometimes it happen to me too :3
but i love being simple tbh
in language, relationship with idols and talentxD
being realistic is one of my favorite things in making OC^^
its like giving my OC a life
Daesunggie
#8
this seems to be quite the unique shop...^^
i will sub for future references! (: