Empty House

Description

Firstly I'd like to thank everyone for the positive feedback on my extremely short one shot "Leaving You Behind", because of this I decided to write another one shot. However, ill try to make this one longer (hopefully a couple of chapters).

Enjoy!

P.S The picture doesn't belong to me I simply found it on google! Full credits to the owner !! :)

Foreword

This empty house is suffocating me. Where ever I turn I am reminded of you. I wait for your return. I wait for you to touch me again. To look at me again. I want to see those eyes again. The same innocent eyes that I fell inlove with.

Mir.... when are you coming back to me?

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AprilSunnday_ukiss #1 Oct 19, 2012 06:32:39

Chapter 4: You make me crying too ! This is too ! I love it but i hate the ending .. Arrghh .. Joon is die ?? NO !!!!

kpopfan_13 #2 Jun 12, 2012 22:56:56

That was so sad. :_:

Seoblove #3 Jun 3, 2012 00:19:04

Omg. I actually cried. Omg. I didn't knew Joonie will die.... :'(

jonniemiru #4 May 28, 2012 18:01:33

Thank you so much everyone <3

Joontaemint #5 May 28, 2012 15:38:08

Oh My God! This is such a good oneshot/story! It's so sad and beautiful! *cries a river* why did Joon die and leave Mir!! Ok I'm gathered and done. Anyways great story! ^^

Lilonita12 #6 May 27, 2012 10:13:47

why do all of your stories make me cry all the time?! You're such a good writer! I love you~!

magikia #7 May 22, 2012 23:31:45

I cried at the end :O I hope you continue to write awesome stories like that, I'll always read ^^

KaishkaKo #8 May 20, 2012 00:32:25

Chapter 4:

ok. first I had to literally get myself together. I turned into an absolute wreck, sitting in my room at 2 in the morning bawling my eyes out because I can't stand the pain. I love that you twisted the story around, leading the reader to believe Mir was the one whom was dead when in reality it was Joon. your story was brilliantly crafted and emotionally divine. I loved every moment of it, even if it broke my heart. one of my all time favs <3

KaishkaKo #9 May 20, 2012 00:27:45

Chapter 3:

oh gods the river of tears just WONT stop flowing! now I am almost a tad confused about who got shot but I will simply read the chapter over again and read on. aish my heart seriously huts so badly right now. your story is wonderful, albeit quite sad.