Chapter 4

Empty House

"Joon" Mir gasped as he got up and ran towards me... and passed me. I don't understand. "JOON!" He cried as he ran around the house.

"MIR! I'm right here Mir!" I shouted with all my might as I ran after him. Why can't you hear me? Why won't you listen to me?

"I heard you Joon." Mir collapsed on the floor. "Why did you leave me Joon." He sobbed louder then ever. "WHY?! You promised me. You said you'd never leave me. You said you'd always protect me."

"I dont... I dont understand Mir. I'm right here. You left me..." I walked towards him and placed my hand on his shoulder. I could feel him.

"It's been four years Joon and I still can't forget your touch." Mir's tears rained onto the cold floor. "I love you so much... Please come back to me. Sometimes... sometimes i can still feel you, hear you but why can't i see you?" 

"Joon" Mir pushed the older man off of him and gasped when he saw blood pouring out of the man. "No .. no .. this cant be happening! JOON!" The boy shook Joon, trying to wake him up. But it was useless. "You cant leave me. You promised me!" He held the man tightly and cried, waiting for help that would never come. 

Mir was soaked with blood when the police arrived. He didn't want to let go, because he knew this was the last time he would hold him. This was the last time he'd see him. He couldn't believe it, it happened too fast. 

Now I understand. Now I remember. 

"I'm so sorry Mir. I didn't want to leave you." Joon hugged the boy "But I had to protect you."

Mir shivered as he felt a presence with him. "Joonie" He whispered in hope that the man would appear next to him. That he'd come back to him. "Is that you Joonie?" 

Nothing.

He got no answer in return.

"I wish you could hear me Mir, so that i could tell you how much I love you." Tears were escaping my eyes as I hugged him tightly. "I wish you could feel me, so i could truly hold you one last time before saying goodbye."

"I wish I could see you one last time Joon." Mir whispered as he closed his eyes trying to picture my face. 

"I have to leave now Mir." Joon smiled as he started to fade away. He didn't want to leave. He'd rather stay trapped in this house forever knowing that he might be able to see Mir again. But he wasn't in control. "Goodbye" he said before fading away completely.

Mir gasped and cried out in pain . "I heard you Joonie." He cried as he punched the floor. "Why did you have to go?"...

 

I will never forget you Joonie...

 

I will wait for you Mir, always...

 

-The End-

 

A/N: I'm actually crying. This is like the first time i got so emotional over my own story. I just...I can't even..... I hope you like this as much as I do !! 

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AprilSunnday_ukiss #1
Chapter 4: You make me crying too ! This is too ! I love it but i hate the ending .. Arrghh .. Joon is die ?? NO !!!!
kpopfan_13 #2
That was so sad. :_:
Seoblove #3
Omg. I actually cried. Omg. I didn't knew Joonie will die.... :'(
jonniemiru
#4
Thank you so much everyone <3
Joontaemint #5
Oh My God! This is such a good oneshot/story! It's so sad and beautiful! *cries a river* why did Joon die and leave Mir!! Ok I'm gathered and done. Anyways great story! ^^
Lilonita12 #6
why do all of your stories make me cry all the time?! You're such a good writer! I love you~!
magikia
#7
I cried at the end :O I hope you continue to write awesome stories like that, I'll always read ^^
KaishkaKo #8
Chapter 4:

ok. first I had to literally get myself together. I turned into an absolute wreck, sitting in my room at 2 in the morning bawling my eyes out because I can't stand the pain. I love that you twisted the story around, leading the reader to believe Mir was the one whom was dead when in reality it was Joon. your story was brilliantly crafted and emotionally divine. I loved every moment of it, even if it broke my heart. one of my all time favs <3
KaishkaKo #9
Chapter 3:

oh gods the river of tears just WONT stop flowing! now I am almost a tad confused about who got shot but I will simply read the chapter over again and read on. aish my heart seriously huts so badly right now. your story is wonderful, albeit quite sad.