Chapter 3

Empty House

A/N: Well at this speed I'm probably going to finish this today !!! I'm always like this, if I start a story I try to finish it as soon as I can! So expect a few more updates today ~

I fight with myself as I try to stand up. I want to run towards those footsteps that are echoing throughout the house. Why can't I move? 

"Joon." I heard a sob coming from our bedroom. The voice was angelic as it rang through my ears.

Mir.

It was Mir. 

He came back to me. I knew he would.

"Mir!" I shouted as I pushed myself with all my might and I managed to move a bit. I fought and fought and eventually made it to the door. Just a little more, let me move some more so I could see his face again.

My heart was breaking with every sob I heard. Why are you crying? My angel, I'm coming to you.

"I miss you so much Joon." I heard his cries so clearly that I could almost touch them. I staggered back as a memory flashed through my eyes.

"Come on let's run!" Shouted one of the robbers, "I hear the cops!" He made a dash for the door. 

"They have seen our faces man we can't let them go!" The other shouted back.

"There's no time idiot c'mon!" I heard the door open. The other wouldn't move. He kept the gun pointed at Mir .

" this." He pulled the trigger and ran.

"MIR!" Joon screamed as he jumped in front of the boy. The loud noise filled their ears as both of them fell to the floor-

I opened my eyes and my hands where covered in blood. Why couldn't I keep my promise Mir? I mustered up all of my strength and ran to the bedroom.

Mir.

There he was.

Kneeling in the middle of the floor crying.

"You came back Mir." I whispered and Mir looked straight at me.

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AprilSunnday_ukiss #1
Chapter 4: You make me crying too ! This is too ! I love it but i hate the ending .. Arrghh .. Joon is die ?? NO !!!!
kpopfan_13 #2
That was so sad. :_:
Seoblove #3
Omg. I actually cried. Omg. I didn't knew Joonie will die.... :'(
jonniemiru
#4
Thank you so much everyone <3
Joontaemint #5
Oh My God! This is such a good oneshot/story! It's so sad and beautiful! *cries a river* why did Joon die and leave Mir!! Ok I'm gathered and done. Anyways great story! ^^
Lilonita12 #6
why do all of your stories make me cry all the time?! You're such a good writer! I love you~!
magikia
#7
I cried at the end :O I hope you continue to write awesome stories like that, I'll always read ^^
KaishkaKo #8
Chapter 4:

ok. first I had to literally get myself together. I turned into an absolute wreck, sitting in my room at 2 in the morning bawling my eyes out because I can't stand the pain. I love that you twisted the story around, leading the reader to believe Mir was the one whom was dead when in reality it was Joon. your story was brilliantly crafted and emotionally divine. I loved every moment of it, even if it broke my heart. one of my all time favs <3
KaishkaKo #9
Chapter 3:

oh gods the river of tears just WONT stop flowing! now I am almost a tad confused about who got shot but I will simply read the chapter over again and read on. aish my heart seriously huts so badly right now. your story is wonderful, albeit quite sad.