how could i live without you

Description

Well hello everyone i’m from morocco and this is my first story i love taoris so i decided to write a story about this lovely couple so don’t judge my english because it’s not my mother language and i hope that you will enjoy this story
 

Foreword



     Tao is a member of the new kpop boy band exo-m he and his fellow member and also with the member of exo-k are working hard to give the world the best music but he has a secret that no one exept for his parents and the ceo of sm town knows.

 

 


    Kris one of exo-m member and the one who helped tao the first time he came to korea. he is in a romantic relation with his band mate luhan. but when he saw tao is no longer he's oldself, he no longer eat or smile as befoure ,so what will happen?
 And what's the matter with tao ? why the sudden luhan is jealous?

the characters

  : exoplanet =exo-m + exo-k and together they will change the world

 

                                         so please write comment so that i would know if i should write it or no and thank you

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shuky3 #1
Well well as Ineure said it's full of mistakes but yhe main idea is great i'm looking forward to read more :) please update soon !
Btw the picture gathering all the members is fabulous though baozi missing ^^
And i seriously can't see Luhan with Kris i can only see Luhan with Kai or Sehun and Kris with ME kkkk i'm joking :) Good work *.*
Ineure
#2
Hiiii first reader~ I saw in your story description that your from Morocco! Thats so cool, i'm also Moroccan,not from Morocco though XD I think your english is very good for someone from Morocco since I know they dont really talk english there :o

anywaysss lol i've never thought of luhan and kris as a couple :o
poor tao ;_; Kris can't you see that tao's your soulmate?! how could you date lulu >_<

*Oh also you have some grammar mistakes ect, maybe you should consider t proofread your chapters so that everyone can follow your story better. Just a tip ^^

Okkk reader out~ (hope your not shocked by the amount of rubbish im dropping here. hehehe)