Scarecrow

Description

 

Oh Scarecrow, Daunting Scarecrow

What if it was the same thing we love?

You look like you could give sorrow

But you only have the innocence of a dove.

 

What would you do if I take one of the crops?

Would you come to life and be dangerous?

Would you be able to do your job…

…be something menacing and perilous?

Foreword

 

I heard someone approach me, and I was filled with hope. Whoever it could be might help me from my piteous situation. Every hope I thought I have vanished when I heard that person hum a melody.

 

That tune was familiar and it always cheered me right up. Only this time, it was hummed eerily. It sent chills down to my spine.

 

Like the atmosphere a scarecrow gives.

 

Still, silent, but you still get an unnerving feel whenever you see one.

MissTangerine
If Scarecrow, confused you or whatever...wait for my Behind the Scenes blog post...*ppyong*

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BLAQjack
#1
Chapter 3: Wow! his story is frightening, but good! The twist was written well :)
I'm guessing Chaerin killed Dara and then killed herself?! *shiver

Thanks for writing this! :D
Rhavege #2
Chapter 3: Wow strong stuff!Really wanted this story to be long one,though
lazybumhypocrital
#3
I read the comments first so I. Already know who killed Jiyong but the way you wrote it made me think otherwise.

Was Chaerin that obsessed to Dara that he killed Jiyong? Cause like what she said, he somehow stole Dara from her. Oh my.. I'm still confused.
RDeeDee
#4
Whoa, the way you kept us guessing who was the killer was really great. I never expected that it was Chaerin, I thought Dara was the one who killed Jiyong.

"He got in the way. He got too close and it cost him his life."
Creepy as hell but it amazing nevertheless!

You're an amazing author! You know how to play with words and you definitely got us hooked!;) You're stories are really worth reading ^^
camillecastaneda #5
an0ther twist in your story nice one Ms author :) thrilling story
21_blackjack_21 #6
:O so scary! I would TOTALLY watch this if it was a movie! People here on AFF are really creative! They have some REALLY good ideas! I enjoys this alot!
joweleg
#7
OHMAYGAWD you got me! I cant believe i fell for that trap "her face screamed of innocence" I was kindda sure it really was Dara specially when ji's last breath was her name. anyways i really enjoyed it Ms Tangerine you really are an awesome writer you haven't disappoint me in your writing , i love all your stories. Gambatte !
blindgalz
#8
Whoa, it's like there's a veil of darkness between them..

Anyway, Dara killed Jiyong.
And then CL and Dara died together.
I think all 3 are innocent and the crows are at fault. ==''
NO, SERIOUSLYY!!! Even Dara didn't know she killed Ji. They must be under a spell..
WT this story is gooooood
caliee #9
confusing...
tonichua #10
Oh! Okay. So Chae Rin was the one who killed Ji Yong then herself and Dara. :D at first, I thought it was Dee. Anyway, why did Chae Rin kill Ji Yong? I was trying to that figure out but I can't think of the reason why. Does she loves him too like what Dara assumed when they first met and she was jealous of Dara? Or I think (I'm betting more on this) she wants her friend Dara all for herself. That's the only thing that makes sense if I will consider the killing sequence. Because if it was the first one, then she should've killed Dara. But she didn't. Instead she killed Ji Yong first then herself and Dara. They were together till the end. kekeke. XD I'm not sure.

And why does Ji Yong regret meeting Dara? I understand why he felt that why towards Chae Rin though. I mean, she killed him. So it's natural to feel that way.

I think I need to read it again. XD anyway, it was a good story. Pardon my long comment. :D I'm really into reading it that I found myself wanting to understand everything. Nice story! :D