Wonderful! I love the detail xx

T^T i miss reading this story. author-nim, are you okay? are you sick? are you busy? hope you update soon when you have time.

update soon! nice~

kyaahhh....!!
New reader/subscriber here~
luv ur fic....xD
update soon!

Grammar, spelling, and punctuation do have an impact on your writing. You wouldn't want to write something that doesn't make sense to the readers or seems off from what they expect of the content presented while they're reading the chapters. If the message isn't clear, we'd be lost about what's actually happening in the story. Constructive criticism is rewarding for writers since they're receiving helpful advice and suggestions to improve their writing. I see that you're getting better at describing this time around. Keep it up!

Nobody is perfect. One can't expect to get it right the first time around. We all tend to make mistakes before we get better at something. That's how we learn and grow. I understand that English isn't very easy for you since you're not fluent in it. Other than AFF being a site to share your creativity with others in expressing yourself through writing, this is a place to learn and develop your writing skills. The same applies to other fanfiction sites too. As a community, we're here to support and help each other out.

Romance must be an important aspect of stories to get the readers, mainly girls, hooked. There's something moving about expressions of love that pulls on their heartstrings. She's bound to get some ideas from her experience with a "hired" boyfriend. Writing about things realistically helps the readers better connect to the story. Suzy's got a point about making the most of those three moths she has together with Myungsoo. Being cheesy and greasy definitely doesn't suit Myungsoo. It does seem unnatural of him to be this way. This is type of behavior is best suited for someone like Woohyun who doesn't give off the cool aura. Like her, I don't prefer greasy guys either. (Personally, I prefer sincerity over flattery.) A guy is at his best when he's being natural. That's why it's uncomfortable for Myungsoo when he had to pretend to be someone he's not. It is tiring to keep up an image rather than to be himself, but that can't be helped since it's required in his job to act as his client's ideal guy. Since she is the passive type, it's obvious to him that she prefers to be led rather than to lead. Myungsoo does have some qualities that makes him a good leader. He must like to joke around out of amusement on the other's behalf to see his/her reaction toward something that he doesn't really mean. I guess those men chasing after him must be the reason why he's doing this kind of job to get the money he needs to pay off a debt. It's likely a family problem.

OH EMM GEEE! PLEASE UPDATE!! ;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~;

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!

OMG YOU!!!!! COME HERE!!!! I WANNA GIVE YOU A BIG BEAR HUG!!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR COMING UP WITH THIS FIC !!! I'VE ALWAYS WANTED TO HIRE A BOYFRIEND FOR MYSELF!!!! THIS IS SOOOO GOOOOD!!! I DON'T HAVE TO IMAGINE MY LIFE HIRING A BOYFRIEND ANYMORE BECAUSE I ALREADY HIRED L AS A BOYFRIEND! MY LIFE IS COMPLETE.

PSSST!!!! UPDATE SOOOOON!!!! xD

Omo! Who are they?!
God! Please update!!!


About your mistakes, it's okay :)))
Since no body is perfect, right?
Plus! As long as your readers understand what you wanted to say, it's already accepted ^^
We're all here in AFF to write amd have fun not to be a perfect author!

So author-ssi, hwaiting!
No need to bother yourself with your errors ^^



I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY <3