Chapter 28: woahhh the ending are so quickkk
i thought the ghost will be haunt them even after the house was burned down
but the story is really good..
and you really saw ghost??
woahhhhhh.. i kinda scared when you told me that.. one because i read this in midnight (no wonder im scared) two, because the ghost are playing with two spoooN! and i thought.. are they playing sword?? heheh
The ending was a bit quick, but it was a fabulous story! I really liked it ^-^
Also, is English your first language? Some of the words didn't really make sense..
But it doesn't matter, good story~ Hwaiting!
It's just end like this?? It's okay i though but i feel i need more for the ending... It's look so easy for them to make the gost gone just end like this... You make a nice story.. ^^
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