Chapter 5.

Fix that Spoiled Brat!

Author's Note: If you look at the tags, Sunggyu is tagged. That does NOT mean he's ~~~'s past lover in this story. He is Myungsoo's brother, who plays an important role in the end. So, please vote in the poll which is in sectioned in Chapter 5. & Thanks so much for 17 subscribers! You know the drill,

maroon = you

blue = myungsoo

green = mom/dad

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Myungsoo POV:

"LEE ~~~ WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN YESTERDAY. I THOUGHT I GROUNDED YOU."

The 4 of us were standing in the living room, ~~~ looking like a mess and I was in my pajamas.

Shoot, I forgot she was still living with her parents when simply she can just buy herself a house.

"Sorry."

I was shocked. Lee ~~~ actually, apologizing?!

"Answer the question, where were you instead of returning home?!"

I saw that ~~~ had her head down and I actually felt 5% of pity for her at this moment.

"Erm, Mr and Mrs. Lee, ~~~ was with me last night. We sorta had a congratulation party for me being her mentor."

I saw ~~~ glance at me with a smirk. Oh how I wish I can erase that smirk since I'm the one saving her right now.

"She forgot to call you because I was giving her ideas on how to change in order to become a better person. So it's my fault. I apologize." I said with a bow.

"Ahem its ok Myungsoo sshi." They turned to ~~~. "Would you mind explaining why you're dressed like this though?"

"Uh you know me. I dress like this all the time. Now if you'll excuse me, I'll be upstairs." ~~~ said with a hair toss.

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Your pov:

He jumped on my bed and I gave him a death glare.

"MAIDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD -"

He once again, covered my mouth.

"Why are you screaming and calling your maid?"

"Because you're laying on my bed. I don't want your stupid garlic onion germs on it."

"Rude."

I rolled my eyes and stared at him for a long time.

"I have to change."

"So?"

"GET OUT."

"Why? I already saw everything last night" he said with a smirk.

My eyes widened, "Yah. Don't joke around. That didn't even happen last night."

"I know, i know. I'll just turn around. Take your time, I won't look."

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"Jah, lets just learn the basic rules on treating adults since we barely have time. First step! Don't cross your arms and bend one knee when talking to somebody." he said as he fixed my posture.

"Wh -"

"Second step. Always bow to your elders, even if they are older than you by a day."

"Bu -" I slouched.

"Third step, don't talk informally in any way."

"Ya-"

"Fourth step, never cut off your elder's words. Like how you're doing to me right now."

"This is so stupid. Why do I need to learn this? I could be shopping right now"

"I'm your mentor. Do you even know what that means? And, if there's people respecting you, don't you think you should too?" he said as he leaned closer to my face.

"Stop doing that."

"Doing what?"

"Being so attractive." I murmered under my breath.

"What did you say?"

"Nothing."

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"WAHHH i can't believe you're letting me go shopping instead of that stupid lesson a while ago!"

As soon as Myungsoo parked in front of the mall, i fake coughed.

"What?"

"Aren't you going to open the door for me?"

"No." he said as he swiftly got out of his car.

"Aish. So arrogant."

- - -

"Why are we the only ones here?"

"I kicked everyone out."

"Seriously, ~~~ that's mean."

"I don't care."

"Well, you are going to care now. Remember the short lesson before about respecting elders? Well, I'm here to test you. Respect all the employees in the store and carry your own bags."

"WHAT? That's impossible."

"It is possible. Now do it before I make your parents deduct your allowance even more."

I gave him a glare and walked into Nordstrom.

"Hello Ms.Lee." an employee bowed.

Usually, I would ignore this and look for a pretty dress but Myungsoo pinched my back and I forcefully greeted back with a bow.

The employee looked surprised as I rolled my eyes and walked away.

Myungsoo's words were still in my head about respect. Aish, if only he didn't threaten me about the money.

After I bought 5 dresses, I took my own bags this time and every employee was staring at me with awe.

I tried so hard not to shout and yell but Myungsoo kept staring at me with a stupid poker face.

We walked out of the whole entire mall and I immediately threw my bags onto Myungsoo's arms.

"There. I did it. Happy? Thank god there were no customers in there."

"You did it! Now you just need to get used to it." he said with a wide, cute grin

I stared at him as he held out his hand for a high-five.

No, I can't be liking and accepting him already. The ~~~ is not like this.

"Just because you're my mentor, it doesn't mean you're my friend." I said as I got into the car.

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Rini6189 #1
She's still not making much of a progress. Myungsoo would have to get more creative about getting her to actually take in what he's teaching her. It's good that he's being patient with her. Knowing him, he definitely won't give up easily even after some setbacks. That is an awkward position for the two to be caught up in. It sounds like he's just teasing her about giving him a kiss to make up for her misbehavior.

Chapter 11 (12) mistakes:

1. "Thanks for breakfast Mrs. Lee!"
* Comma after "breakfast"

2. LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK.
* Comma after "me"

3. "This is so stupid, since I hired you, can't you do it?"
Correction: "This is so stupid. Since I hired you, can't you do it?"

4. You gulped and try to make a run for it, but he tackled you to the ground.
Correction: tried
Rini6189 #2
It's not wise to have more than a little drink when you can't handle that much. Since I'm not a drinker myself, I wouldn't be able to hold my alcohol well if I had a few drinks. It's good that she has Myungsoo there to keep her from getting herself into more trouble. In addition to being a mentor, he's practically her babysitter--keeping her in check. His father is heartless. Myungsoo has done the right thing by not complying to his father's dirty deeds even at the risk of letting his family down. He really does care about her to not want to hurt her. That's "love."

xD It must be a "spur of the moment" thing for HeyAsian to mention Sunggyu's solo song, "Because," as she's typing his part. That tends to disrupt the mood that the readers get into while reading a serious part. If that's done in a comedy, it'd fit the mood well.
Rini6189 #3
Chapter 10 (11) mistakes:

1. you sighed as you drank your coffee while putting your legs up at your desk.
Correction: on your desk
*The beginning of each sentence that's not a part of the dialogue must be capitalized.

2. An employee next door came into your and Myungsoo's office without knocking.
Correction: An employee next door came into your, and Myungsoo's, office without knocking.

3. Meanwhile, you finished the glass of beer, which was probably your ninth glass and put your head down on the table.
*Extra comma needed after "glass"

4. he said as he literally threw you in the car.
Correction: into

5. I took her bridal style back to her house,
Correction: carried

6. It was Sunggyu who was rubbing his hands together because of the cold outside.
Correction: cold temperature

7. She may be bratty, y, snappy, and greedy, but in the inside, she's hurt.
Correction: on the inside

8. I thought that if I kept on going, it'll hurt her feelings, but now either way it'll hurt her.
* A pair of commas need to be added before and after "either way."
daesooxxz #4
Yeah man! I get it (when it comes to Sunggyu's solo song). Hahaha. *high five!*
Rini6189 #5
Because of his capabilities that make him suitable for a position in the Lee company, it must be easy for him to land that job (in addition to mentoring her). It must be his father's order to apply for a job at the company. He really is that attractive to draw in a swarm of ladies. That little food fight they had going on between them is childish. Despite being mature most times, he has a playful side to him. Showing her this side of him in front of her must be his way of getting her to lighten up and not be uncomfortable around him. Giving her a compliment is a form of flattery--to get in her good graces. Though, Myungsoo doesn't seem the type who'd say something that he doesn't mean. For him to know some things about her already, her parents must've informed him about her and her attitude/behavior/habits that displeases them so that he'll be aware of what she needs to change about herself as her mentor. This is to prepare him beforehand in order for him to figure out how to deal with her. The more he hangs around her, the more opportunities they'll get to know each other better. Things could turn ugly once they find out that their rival company's plans to take them down from the inside.
Rini6189 #6
Chapter 9 ("Chapter 10") mistakes:

1. You rolled your eyes, thank god you were wearing shades and replied back to everybody,
Correction: You rolled your eyes--thank God you were wearing shades--and replied back to everybody,
* The phrase that starts with "thank God" is obviously not a part of the sentence. The hyphens are placed there to separate the interruption.

2. You took a look around the main floor, rolling your eyes at employees who were just sitting on their chair, doing absolutely nothing.
Correction: You took a look around the main floor and rolled your eyes at employees who were just sitting in their chairs doing absolutely nothing.

3. You got out of the stall and the two females eyes widened.
Correction females' eyes

4. The waitress came and took are orders, then coming back a few minutes later with his food...
Correction: The waitress came and took our orders then came back a few minutes later with his food...

5. He then took some icing off my cupcake and smeared it on my nose and cheek.
Correction: my nose and my cheeks

*Note: It's written as "French fry."
gongturchan #7
@woohinfinite - soon! :)
@GeekInspirit - maybe, maybe not! stay tuned ~
@aNONAmous - hehe
@tamiyoung - maybe maybe not kekkeke
tamiyoung #8
aww they just didn't realize that they already fallen in love with each other ^^ i think myungsoo is the one who gonna rebel his father
GeekInspirit #9
HE CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL!! BUT is he going to betray her? :'(
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