Chapter 11

Fix that Spoiled Brat!

OTL, sorry for not updating ;-;
Here's a short update.
I shall write one soon also~
Something is happening...
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Today was a Saturday.
Not only was I happy because I didn't have work, but because I didn't have to see Myungsoo's face! Woohoo! Gosh, he is so annoying. He always tries to into my life and know everything about me.
I have my boundaries.

"~~~~~~, come down for breakfast!" my mom yelled from downstairs. When she yells my name for breakfast, you know that it's gonna be a good breakfast. As I trotted down the stairs to the table, Myungsoo was there. That stupid smile was on his face as he patted the seat next to him.

"What are you doing here?" I stood in front of the door frame glaring at him.

"Your mother told me to come over for breakfast and lessons." he replied.

"Mom wh-"

"Now hold it young lady, you know that soon you will be taking over our company, do you understand? Now I want to see your attitude improve or else I will do something about it." she placed 2 omelets on Myungsoo's plate as he chuckled at your mom's outburst.

"You are really annoying and childish, you know that right?" you sighed as you took your seat.

"Yah, ~~~~~ do not tr-"

"I know, I know, do not treat guests like that, I know, but he's technically not a guest since he's not human." his face turned red with embarrassment.

"If you want me to leave, I'll leave. I guess that she just won't get her allowance..."

"Don't you dare threaten my allowance!"

"I'm not, you determine your future."

"AISH, what are we doing then."

"We are going to learn how to do business stuff, like make graphs, charts, stuff like that."

"You are not serious right?" he smiled at your reaction and dragged you to the door.

"Thanks for breakfast Mrs. Lee!"

"No problem."

"ARE YOU JUST GOING TO LET HIM KIDNAP ME? LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK." he dragged you out the door into his car.

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"...and that is how you calculate how much money you are earning using a line graph." he turned around and smiled at you, but you were so lost.

"This is so stupid, since I hired you, can't you do it?"

"This is simple!"

"Then why do I not get this?"

"I'll go over this one more time." as he turned back around, you threw a paper ball at him.

"Y-Yah, Lee ~~~~~~ stop that!" he yelled as you threw even more at him.

"I'm hungry... and bored. Stop being so boring!" he glared at you and came closer and closer. You gulped and try to make a run for it, but he tackled you to the ground.

", LET GO OF ME."

"Not if you apologize~" you pinched his hands and wiggled around, but his grip was too strong. You relaxed a bit because you knew that you were never ever going to apologize... until you noticed the position you were in.
His arms were around your waist and his chin rested on your shoulder.

"I can stay like this forever, I don't know about you." he whimpered, sending chills down your spine.

"You sicko... I-I'm sorry." he still didn't let you go.

"I said I'm sorry." he still wouldn't budge.

"Now you have to give me a kiss~" you smacked his face and he let go of you.

"O-O-Ow!" when you walked away, you didn't notice his smile. He was happy that you two were finally getting closer...

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Rini6189 #1
She's still not making much of a progress. Myungsoo would have to get more creative about getting her to actually take in what he's teaching her. It's good that he's being patient with her. Knowing him, he definitely won't give up easily even after some setbacks. That is an awkward position for the two to be caught up in. It sounds like he's just teasing her about giving him a kiss to make up for her misbehavior.

Chapter 11 (12) mistakes:

1. "Thanks for breakfast Mrs. Lee!"
* Comma after "breakfast"

2. LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK.
* Comma after "me"

3. "This is so stupid, since I hired you, can't you do it?"
Correction: "This is so stupid. Since I hired you, can't you do it?"

4. You gulped and try to make a run for it, but he tackled you to the ground.
Correction: tried
Rini6189 #2
It's not wise to have more than a little drink when you can't handle that much. Since I'm not a drinker myself, I wouldn't be able to hold my alcohol well if I had a few drinks. It's good that she has Myungsoo there to keep her from getting herself into more trouble. In addition to being a mentor, he's practically her babysitter--keeping her in check. His father is heartless. Myungsoo has done the right thing by not complying to his father's dirty deeds even at the risk of letting his family down. He really does care about her to not want to hurt her. That's "love."

xD It must be a "spur of the moment" thing for HeyAsian to mention Sunggyu's solo song, "Because," as she's typing his part. That tends to disrupt the mood that the readers get into while reading a serious part. If that's done in a comedy, it'd fit the mood well.
Rini6189 #3
Chapter 10 (11) mistakes:

1. you sighed as you drank your coffee while putting your legs up at your desk.
Correction: on your desk
*The beginning of each sentence that's not a part of the dialogue must be capitalized.

2. An employee next door came into your and Myungsoo's office without knocking.
Correction: An employee next door came into your, and Myungsoo's, office without knocking.

3. Meanwhile, you finished the glass of beer, which was probably your ninth glass and put your head down on the table.
*Extra comma needed after "glass"

4. he said as he literally threw you in the car.
Correction: into

5. I took her bridal style back to her house,
Correction: carried

6. It was Sunggyu who was rubbing his hands together because of the cold outside.
Correction: cold temperature

7. She may be bratty, y, snappy, and greedy, but in the inside, she's hurt.
Correction: on the inside

8. I thought that if I kept on going, it'll hurt her feelings, but now either way it'll hurt her.
* A pair of commas need to be added before and after "either way."
daesooxxz #4
Yeah man! I get it (when it comes to Sunggyu's solo song). Hahaha. *high five!*
Rini6189 #5
Because of his capabilities that make him suitable for a position in the Lee company, it must be easy for him to land that job (in addition to mentoring her). It must be his father's order to apply for a job at the company. He really is that attractive to draw in a swarm of ladies. That little food fight they had going on between them is childish. Despite being mature most times, he has a playful side to him. Showing her this side of him in front of her must be his way of getting her to lighten up and not be uncomfortable around him. Giving her a compliment is a form of flattery--to get in her good graces. Though, Myungsoo doesn't seem the type who'd say something that he doesn't mean. For him to know some things about her already, her parents must've informed him about her and her attitude/behavior/habits that displeases them so that he'll be aware of what she needs to change about herself as her mentor. This is to prepare him beforehand in order for him to figure out how to deal with her. The more he hangs around her, the more opportunities they'll get to know each other better. Things could turn ugly once they find out that their rival company's plans to take them down from the inside.
Rini6189 #6
Chapter 9 ("Chapter 10") mistakes:

1. You rolled your eyes, thank god you were wearing shades and replied back to everybody,
Correction: You rolled your eyes--thank God you were wearing shades--and replied back to everybody,
* The phrase that starts with "thank God" is obviously not a part of the sentence. The hyphens are placed there to separate the interruption.

2. You took a look around the main floor, rolling your eyes at employees who were just sitting on their chair, doing absolutely nothing.
Correction: You took a look around the main floor and rolled your eyes at employees who were just sitting in their chairs doing absolutely nothing.

3. You got out of the stall and the two females eyes widened.
Correction females' eyes

4. The waitress came and took are orders, then coming back a few minutes later with his food...
Correction: The waitress came and took our orders then came back a few minutes later with his food...

5. He then took some icing off my cupcake and smeared it on my nose and cheek.
Correction: my nose and my cheeks

*Note: It's written as "French fry."
gongturchan #7
@woohinfinite - soon! :)
@GeekInspirit - maybe, maybe not! stay tuned ~
@aNONAmous - hehe
@tamiyoung - maybe maybe not kekkeke
tamiyoung #8
aww they just didn't realize that they already fallen in love with each other ^^ i think myungsoo is the one who gonna rebel his father
GeekInspirit #9
HE CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL!! BUT is he going to betray her? :'(
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