Chapter 4.

Fix that Spoiled Brat!

maroon = you

blue = myungsoo

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The sunlight shined in my eyes as they slowly fluttered open. That was when I realized that I wasn't in my comfortable, king size bed.

I cautiously stood up, trying to remember what happened last night.

I looked down and saw that I was still wearing my black dress, only to have a blanket on top.

I took out my cell phone that was in my bra (lol) and called Sungjong.

*ring* *ring* *ring* I'm sorry, the number you have called is unavaliable.

"."

I stepped out of the unfamiliar bed, only to step on someone's stomach.

I looked down and realized it was my soon to be mentor.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"

"ugh shut upppp"

"YAH! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? WHY AM I HERE? OMO! DID YOU ME? I WILL CALL THE POLICE -"

He covered my mouth and my eyes widened. To be honest, he looked cute with his bed hair.

I harshly took his warm hands away from me and screamed bloody mary.

"YAH LEE ~~~, QUIET DOWN. JUST LET ME EXPLAIN!"

"Let me guess, you and I slept together, NO i was drunk so you took advantage of me right? Oh ho ho if my father finds out, you will be soooo fired and -"

"NO. You were drunk and you were crying while walking on the streets and then you begged me to help you and then you passed out. OKAY? Stop making silly inferances."

 

Myungsoo POV:

Psh. Silly brat. 

After my explanantion, she grew quiet. I smirked. I should a little bit.

"Wae? Do you want me to take advantage of you?" I said with a smirk.

"W-w-hat? Yah. I will sue you."

"Sue for what? Sleeping with you?" i walked closer to her.

"After all, you begged me to help you yesterday night. Help you with what? This?" I put my arms around her waist.

"Y-y-yah, get off me, ert."

Her face was like a tomato and I couldn't hold my laugh in any longer.

"PUAH HA AHAAH YOU SHOULD HAVE SEEN YOUR FACE. DO YOU SERIOUSLY THINK I WAS GOING TO DO SOMETHING TO YOU?" I literally fell on the floor and laughed like there was no tomorrow. After my laughter died down, I realized that she was no longer in my room.

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I found ~~~ downstairs, talking to one of her butlers on the phone. I heard her say,

"Ya, how can you just leave me with this ? Pick me up NOW or else you're fired. I will blame you if Dad scolds me."

I rolled my eyes.

"Yah, how can you treat somebody like that?"

"Why do you care?"

"Well, you're being a brat to somebody you barely know."

"Same goes to you."

I was about to say something, but I didn't want to start an argument, nor get on bad terms with her.

"Do you need me to take you home?"

She shook her head, but I nodded. She tilted her head and I found that pretty cute.

"Well, our session is today, isn't it?"

"No, who said you were my mentor?"

"Clearly you did, when you drunk last night." I smirked. She rolled her eyes, once again. That was like her trademark.

I picked her up bridal style and dragged her to my car.

"PUT ME DOWN YOU ARROGANT PIECE OF - "

I slammed the car door and this time, I rolled my eyes.

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Authors Note: If it seems like I'm rushing, I'm sorry. This story is more focused on what happens after he becomes her mentor.

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Rini6189
#1
She's still not making much of a progress. Myungsoo would have to get more creative about getting her to actually take in what he's teaching her. It's good that he's being patient with her. Knowing him, he definitely won't give up easily even after some setbacks. That is an awkward position for the two to be caught up in. It sounds like he's just teasing her about giving him a kiss to make up for her misbehavior.

Chapter 11 (12) mistakes:

1. "Thanks for breakfast Mrs. Lee!"
* Comma after "breakfast"

2. LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK.
* Comma after "me"

3. "This is so stupid, since I hired you, can't you do it?"
Correction: "This is so stupid. Since I hired you, can't you do it?"

4. You gulped and try to make a run for it, but he tackled you to the ground.
Correction: tried
Rini6189
#2
It's not wise to have more than a little drink when you can't handle that much. Since I'm not a drinker myself, I wouldn't be able to hold my alcohol well if I had a few drinks. It's good that she has Myungsoo there to keep her from getting herself into more trouble. In addition to being a mentor, he's practically her babysitter--keeping her in check. His father is heartless. Myungsoo has done the right thing by not complying to his father's dirty deeds even at the risk of letting his family down. He really does care about her to not want to hurt her. That's "love."

xD It must be a "spur of the moment" thing for HeyAsian to mention Sunggyu's solo song, "Because," as she's typing his part. That tends to disrupt the mood that the readers get into while reading a serious part. If that's done in a comedy, it'd fit the mood well.
Rini6189
#3
Chapter 10 (11) mistakes:

1. you sighed as you drank your coffee while putting your legs up at your desk.
Correction: on your desk
*The beginning of each sentence that's not a part of the dialogue must be capitalized.

2. An employee next door came into your and Myungsoo's office without knocking.
Correction: An employee next door came into your, and Myungsoo's, office without knocking.

3. Meanwhile, you finished the glass of beer, which was probably your ninth glass and put your head down on the table.
*Extra comma needed after "glass"

4. he said as he literally threw you in the car.
Correction: into

5. I took her bridal style back to her house,
Correction: carried

6. It was Sunggyu who was rubbing his hands together because of the cold outside.
Correction: cold temperature

7. She may be bratty, y, snappy, and greedy, but in the inside, she's hurt.
Correction: on the inside

8. I thought that if I kept on going, it'll hurt her feelings, but now either way it'll hurt her.
* A pair of commas need to be added before and after "either way."
daesooxxz
#4
Yeah man! I get it (when it comes to Sunggyu's solo song). Hahaha. *high five!*
Rini6189
#5
Because of his capabilities that make him suitable for a position in the Lee company, it must be easy for him to land that job (in addition to mentoring her). It must be his father's order to apply for a job at the company. He really is that attractive to draw in a swarm of ladies. That little food fight they had going on between them is childish. Despite being mature most times, he has a playful side to him. Showing her this side of him in front of her must be his way of getting her to lighten up and not be uncomfortable around him. Giving her a compliment is a form of flattery--to get in her good graces. Though, Myungsoo doesn't seem the type who'd say something that he doesn't mean. For him to know some things about her already, her parents must've informed him about her and her attitude/behavior/habits that displeases them so that he'll be aware of what she needs to change about herself as her mentor. This is to prepare him beforehand in order for him to figure out how to deal with her. The more he hangs around her, the more opportunities they'll get to know each other better. Things could turn ugly once they find out that their rival company's plans to take them down from the inside.
Rini6189
#6
Chapter 9 ("Chapter 10") mistakes:

1. You rolled your eyes, thank god you were wearing shades and replied back to everybody,
Correction: You rolled your eyes--thank God you were wearing shades--and replied back to everybody,
* The phrase that starts with "thank God" is obviously not a part of the sentence. The hyphens are placed there to separate the interruption.

2. You took a look around the main floor, rolling your eyes at employees who were just sitting on their chair, doing absolutely nothing.
Correction: You took a look around the main floor and rolled your eyes at employees who were just sitting in their chairs doing absolutely nothing.

3. You got out of the stall and the two females eyes widened.
Correction females' eyes

4. The waitress came and took are orders, then coming back a few minutes later with his food...
Correction: The waitress came and took our orders then came back a few minutes later with his food...

5. He then took some icing off my cupcake and smeared it on my nose and cheek.
Correction: my nose and my cheeks

*Note: It's written as "French fry."
gongturchan #7
@woohinfinite - soon! :)
@GeekInspirit - maybe, maybe not! stay tuned ~
@aNONAmous - hehe
@tamiyoung - maybe maybe not kekkeke
tamiyoung
#8
aww they just didn't realize that they already fallen in love with each other ^^ i think myungsoo is the one who gonna rebel his father
GeekInspirit
#9
HE CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL!! BUT is he going to betray her? :'(