Chapter 10.

Fix that Spoiled Brat!

You were now sitting across from Myungsoo in a small office on the fourth floor. It was your second week at work and you weren't loving it. The first week you started working, many people have asked you to make copies of papers for them or fax it to another employee at the company. You kept thinking on how annoying it was since they could just do it themselves. You have tried so many times to hold in your anger in which you succeeded, but this week, you weren't going to do their orders.

"This is the life." you sighed as you drank your coffee while putting your legs up at your desk.

"Yah. What did I tell you about manners?" Myungsoo glared at me.

"Um, this is my company, so I could do whatever." you smirked.

"I will report to your dad about your behavior." he threatened.

You groaned on how Myungsoo always threatens you with the same excuse every time you do something unnecessary. An employee next door came into your and Myungsoo's office without knocking.

"Hey we're having a small party tonight at a go-gi place. Want to come? I'm paying." he asked both of us.

'Go-gi place? Isn't it that place where the restaurant is small and cheap?' you thought.

"Sure, we'll come." Myungsoo answered. You glared at him since he didn't even ask for your opinion yet.

"Great, meet us at the lobby at nine." the employee replied, slamming the door shut.

"He has no manners." you said confidently. Myungsoo just chuckled and shook his head.

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"Stop it ~~~." Myungsoo ordered as he tried to take the glass full of beer away from you. You grunted as you took back the glass of beer. You were basically drunk, along with most of your co-workers. The party started off fine but as soon as it reached midnight, things got crazy and everybody started to drink and dance at the restaurant. Meanwhile, you finished the glass of beer, which was probably your ninth glass and put your head down on the table.

Myungsoo and a few other employees weren't drunk since they knew how to hold in their alcohol. And the rest of the workers, well, they were already sleeping on the floor or on the table.

You shot your head up and sang A Pink's I Don't Know in front of all the employees. Myungsoo was just preparing on what he should do in case you do something stupid. Some employees who weren't drunk were cheering you on as you danced to the song while swaying back and forth.

"Myungsoo yah! Look at me!" you cheerfully grinned as you did the butterfly dance in front of his face.

"That's enough ~~~. Let's leave. We have work tomorrow." Myungsoo said with a hint of annoyance since he had to take care of you who was clearly drunk. He carried you bridal style into his car but you accidently hit your head on the tip of the car door.

"YAH!" you yelled into his ear.

"Ugh, even if you're drunk you still yell at me." he said as he literally threw you in the car.

"Is Myungie mad kekeke?" you slurred. He slammed the car door shut leaving you giggling at his reaction. By the time he got into the car, which was five seconds later, you were already passed out.

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"I can't do it." Myungsoo whispered over the phone. He was almost near your house, but he didn't want to wake you up.

"Mwoh?!" Sunggyu shrieked back. Myungsoo rolled his eyes.

"You heard me! You may not have eyes, but I'm pretty sure you have ears."

"Why are you like this all of a sudden? What happened to the paper?"

"I ripped it up. I'm not doing dirty deeds for you guys anymore." Myungsoo hung up.

"Father, he's betraying us!" Sunggyu yelled to his father in his office. Sunggyu's father was deep in thought until he replied,

"I'll talk to him. You can leave now, Sunggyu." Sunggyu nodded and bowed before he left. Sunggyu's father smirked. The father's assistant scolded him.

"You shouldn't be doing this to your sons." the assistant said with worry.

"Sons? More like my toys." the father chuckled as he stepped out of the office with a fake smile.

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Myungsoo's POV

I tried waking her up in any way possible, slapping her, pinching her, flicking her, but she just wouldn't wake up. Now I know how my (friends/brothers) feel when they try to wake me up. I took her bridal style back to her house, laid her down to sleep, said my goodbyes to her parents, and left the house. As I arrived home, a figure was there waiting for me. It was Sunggyu who was rubbing his hands together because of the cold outside.

"Myungsoo! We need to talk now." his teeth were chattering.

"Come inside before you die of hypothermia." before I can unlock the door, he pushed me into the stair rail.

"We need to talk now. You know Hoya? Yeah, he works for our company PLUS he was her ex. We are planning to use him. Well, I don't want to use him because they had tension before and... that'll take up time. This is my warning to you. I feel (that. Get it? I feel that. Sunggyu's solo song... no?) like you actually care about this girl-"

"STOP." I couldn't take this anymore. I don't know what my feelings were. I don't know if I wanted to do this for my own sake. I knew that they might bring Hoya into this, but I can't do this to her. She may be bratty, y, snappy, and greedy, but in the inside, she's hurt. She was hurt by him and that's why she changed and became who she now is. I was changing her back, but if Hoya was brought into this, she would stay the same. I couldn't let this happen... I-I.. I pushed Sunggyu out of the way and went inside my apartment. He tried to barge in, but I closed the door on him before he can enter. I'm smooth.

"OPEN THIS DOOR NOW MYUNGSOO!" he shook the whole apartment, slamming against the door, pounding on it, stuff like that. After a couple of minutes, he left.

I turned him down for my feelings.

I let my whole 'company family' down, but I didn't care.

I thought that if I kept on going, it'll hurt her feelings, but now either way it'll hurt her.

Wait, am I in-in love with her?

What do I do?

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Author's Note: Sorry I haven't been updating as much. I have been updating my other ongoing fanfic though, The Outcast's Journal.(M)

So how'd you think of this chapter? Don't worry, we didn't forget about Hoya LOL. He's comin soon again ~

 I laughed when HeyAsian wrote (i feel that) LOL. As usual, thanks for 58 subscribers <3.

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Rini6189
#1
She's still not making much of a progress. Myungsoo would have to get more creative about getting her to actually take in what he's teaching her. It's good that he's being patient with her. Knowing him, he definitely won't give up easily even after some setbacks. That is an awkward position for the two to be caught up in. It sounds like he's just teasing her about giving him a kiss to make up for her misbehavior.

Chapter 11 (12) mistakes:

1. "Thanks for breakfast Mrs. Lee!"
* Comma after "breakfast"

2. LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK.
* Comma after "me"

3. "This is so stupid, since I hired you, can't you do it?"
Correction: "This is so stupid. Since I hired you, can't you do it?"

4. You gulped and try to make a run for it, but he tackled you to the ground.
Correction: tried
Rini6189
#2
It's not wise to have more than a little drink when you can't handle that much. Since I'm not a drinker myself, I wouldn't be able to hold my alcohol well if I had a few drinks. It's good that she has Myungsoo there to keep her from getting herself into more trouble. In addition to being a mentor, he's practically her babysitter--keeping her in check. His father is heartless. Myungsoo has done the right thing by not complying to his father's dirty deeds even at the risk of letting his family down. He really does care about her to not want to hurt her. That's "love."

xD It must be a "spur of the moment" thing for HeyAsian to mention Sunggyu's solo song, "Because," as she's typing his part. That tends to disrupt the mood that the readers get into while reading a serious part. If that's done in a comedy, it'd fit the mood well.
Rini6189
#3
Chapter 10 (11) mistakes:

1. you sighed as you drank your coffee while putting your legs up at your desk.
Correction: on your desk
*The beginning of each sentence that's not a part of the dialogue must be capitalized.

2. An employee next door came into your and Myungsoo's office without knocking.
Correction: An employee next door came into your, and Myungsoo's, office without knocking.

3. Meanwhile, you finished the glass of beer, which was probably your ninth glass and put your head down on the table.
*Extra comma needed after "glass"

4. he said as he literally threw you in the car.
Correction: into

5. I took her bridal style back to her house,
Correction: carried

6. It was Sunggyu who was rubbing his hands together because of the cold outside.
Correction: cold temperature

7. She may be bratty, y, snappy, and greedy, but in the inside, she's hurt.
Correction: on the inside

8. I thought that if I kept on going, it'll hurt her feelings, but now either way it'll hurt her.
* A pair of commas need to be added before and after "either way."
daesooxxz
#4
Yeah man! I get it (when it comes to Sunggyu's solo song). Hahaha. *high five!*
Rini6189
#5
Because of his capabilities that make him suitable for a position in the Lee company, it must be easy for him to land that job (in addition to mentoring her). It must be his father's order to apply for a job at the company. He really is that attractive to draw in a swarm of ladies. That little food fight they had going on between them is childish. Despite being mature most times, he has a playful side to him. Showing her this side of him in front of her must be his way of getting her to lighten up and not be uncomfortable around him. Giving her a compliment is a form of flattery--to get in her good graces. Though, Myungsoo doesn't seem the type who'd say something that he doesn't mean. For him to know some things about her already, her parents must've informed him about her and her attitude/behavior/habits that displeases them so that he'll be aware of what she needs to change about herself as her mentor. This is to prepare him beforehand in order for him to figure out how to deal with her. The more he hangs around her, the more opportunities they'll get to know each other better. Things could turn ugly once they find out that their rival company's plans to take them down from the inside.
Rini6189
#6
Chapter 9 ("Chapter 10") mistakes:

1. You rolled your eyes, thank god you were wearing shades and replied back to everybody,
Correction: You rolled your eyes--thank God you were wearing shades--and replied back to everybody,
* The phrase that starts with "thank God" is obviously not a part of the sentence. The hyphens are placed there to separate the interruption.

2. You took a look around the main floor, rolling your eyes at employees who were just sitting on their chair, doing absolutely nothing.
Correction: You took a look around the main floor and rolled your eyes at employees who were just sitting in their chairs doing absolutely nothing.

3. You got out of the stall and the two females eyes widened.
Correction females' eyes

4. The waitress came and took are orders, then coming back a few minutes later with his food...
Correction: The waitress came and took our orders then came back a few minutes later with his food...

5. He then took some icing off my cupcake and smeared it on my nose and cheek.
Correction: my nose and my cheeks

*Note: It's written as "French fry."
gongturchan #7
@woohinfinite - soon! :)
@GeekInspirit - maybe, maybe not! stay tuned ~
@aNONAmous - hehe
@tamiyoung - maybe maybe not kekkeke
tamiyoung
#8
aww they just didn't realize that they already fallen in love with each other ^^ i think myungsoo is the one who gonna rebel his father
GeekInspirit
#9
HE CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL!! BUT is he going to betray her? :'(