Chapter 1: I really like the story idea. The plot is very interesting, love the mystery it sets. Also love that you chose X EXO for the story, Obsession is my favourite EXO concept.

Sadly it looks like not a lot of people read this story but I hope it won’t discourage you to keep writing because this story has lot of potential.

My suggestion, maybe you can add a little bit more description and emotion to actions. But you don’t have to, it is just a suggestion from a fellow writer. ^^

I am curious on why X - EXO kidnapped Junmyeon. And how the deal turns out.

Thank you for writing this story! Keep up the good job!