Soundless

Description

With Kevin, you were a fairytale couple, but Eli came along and ruined everything. Kevin came in soundlessly, yet Eli rocked the boat.

Characters: You, Kevin, Eli

Theme: Failed angst; sadness

Foreword

A quick oneshot of my favourite band U KISS! ^^ I'll probably use Kevin and Eli again for another oneshot (without OCs), but for this one it's written in second person. I do not hold grudges against any characters and do not necessarily believe in what is written.

Please comment and tell me how this was!

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acelysia #1
Chapter 1: Ah!! Is that Kevin in the end picking her up saying, "I forgive you.." ??
Or it's just her imagination?
TaeJiYeonMin #2
Chapter 1: Kyaa this story mad me cry.. :')
ellyemilyn #3
Chapter 1: girl you hurt my heart haha :p
imperfect22 #4
daebak!!!!
make a sequel pls......
so touchin
Joyvin #5
You should make a sequel ^^
hyerinrin #6
ah daeeebak!! good fanfict, because of lyn's song and this ff i'm crying T.T
hallothere #7
kekekeke. This is the best one out of your stories so far. So much better than the one of Dongho being a murderer (HOW COULD YOU!!). even though i didn't cry (probably because i was listening to hello by Shinee, doesn't really match), it is really good. Brings out the emotions i have no idea what i am saying...
yurifan14 #8
Sequel to when she get back with my Kevin.
Kay_tea114 #9
I was really confused as to WHO was talking. I think if you wrote in first person it'll be very clear. This way the emotions will be more striking and profound. ^^

Kevin...;~; I'm ashamed that I say I like Eli more than him. He seems like a nice guy. D:
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