All Roses Have Thorns

Description

Trapped as a ransom against your own gang, what happens when past scars are reopened, new ties create more questions then answers.

This story was inspired by the music video for Warrior, it's a story based on some visuals that stuck in my head.  When I started writing I intended for this story to be a simple one-shot...but it has already become much more complex than that, and deserves to be made into a full story.  This story will have some mystery, some light violence, some suggestive writing (though never any - I just can't bring myself to write it >.<)  and plenty of tension. 

I hope you like it^^

I don't want to give too much away in the forward, so it will simply be the first paragraph of the first chapter.  (Unfortunately it doesn't have B.A.P in it, but I hope it is enough to bring you back for the first chapter)

Foreword

I always knew that idiot would get himself in to trouble.I am livid, my rough, angry steps hit the wet cement causing the sound to echo off the dark alley way.  It’s the only sound in the still night.  Who the hell does Hongki think he is to send Seunghyun out without my permission? Is his memory bad? Does he not remember what happened last time when I stupidly sent Wonbin out alone…My thoughts are racing ahead of my feet like mice scattering away from a fire.  My mood is swinging back and forth from pure rage, intense fear, and a melancholy I only feel when thinking about Wonbin.  I will personally kill Hongki if anything has happened to Seunghyun.

finbatix
I only updated the thank you to Roses - I am writing an entirely new story abotu BAP called "Prophecy"

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AjLee149
#1
Chapter 36: Wow.... That was a very harsh but great story. I loved the ending! She gets with Himchan and Wonbin is not dead! Aww it made me cry so much too!
143mimoky
#2
Chapter 36: at first, i hesitated to read this fic but suddenly changed at the end. i tell you author, it is indeed a good story. i just read it in one go. i stay up late just to finished this and it was worth it. though i admit uhm.. i'm quite not satisfied with the ending. for me, it would be great if you just elaborate what happened to the gang like that. coz you know author-nim(doing a pouty face?) i don't want an open ending. hul~~~ kamsahamnida authornim. :)
NinjaDae
#3
Chapter 36: Omg stayed up late to read this xD slightly confusing with pov changes but damn your story was badass good
onewjr #4
Chapter 36: ahh! i cried for nothing! grr!!! i loved it though
SimplyJady #5
Chapter 36: Oh.my.goodness. You played us! >:( I loved it!!!
moonless_mai
#6
Chapter 36: OMYGOSH WHAT?!! Hongki is still alive?!! Whaat?!! Whaat?!!!!!
Oh you, you're so sneaky!!! I knew Himchan was still alive but I actually fell for Hongki's death!! =0
soo I shed tears for no reason?! Lol
I was suspicious over Hongki's death but I was thinking maybe Jonghoon was responsible for it or something..but WOAH HE ENDED UP BEING ALIVE!! YAY!! =D

I liked how the end was bitter-sweet <3
Ah I can't believe you've finished it already =(
I know you took your time writing this and I waited life for updates but boy was it worth it and that's why I'm asking if there's any chance of a sequel?? (if you have time)

P.S ThankYOU for writing such an awesome story!! I loved it!! =D x
MiChan
#7
Chapter 36: loved it! from beginning to end
dragonsoup_ #8
Chapter 36: Woah.. Love this AWESOME story a lot. I didn't expected everything ended up this way tho.. You make this story completedly fit myself.. from the start till the end.. that's totally my style :) Btw, seriously this story is the best i've read.. and this will be the first time i comment on someone fanfic .. There's slightly confusion in it witch when you changed the person.. i mean i hope the next story you make.. you mentioned whos part this is xD I know im not allowed to give comment like this but I REALLY REALLY ADMIRE YOU GUYS! sincerely. <3
gabbie14
#9
Chapter 36: This deserves a second part. JUST SAYIN.
And congratulations on this story. This is honestly the first story that has made me cried.
KittensCanKill #10
Chapter 36: *CLAPS* Loved this story so much! <3 Thank-you,a thousand times over, for writing this story! I loved every bit of it :D And I'm so glad Hongki is alive!!!