Hello! I don't really know the members of SuperM(Except for the EXO ones and Taemin), so I don't know the two mains. But I still found myself enjoying this! Especially the but I'm a :3 It had enough drama in it but didn't make me feel all sick. Nice job
Chapter 3: oh, i'm always in for a good luten, but man, it was confusing at times, at least chapter two. and luten should be more appreciated! thanks for writing it~
I honestly never read a fanfic about this pair in my life. This is my very first time reading a story about Lucas and Ten and it made me think that they could be really cute together.
That comeback Ten slapped Jenie with, I wanna send my prayers to her cause I felt that in my own heart. Ten was there in a second like a mama lion protecting her cub, he deserves best defender of the year award.
Love that you included some of my favorite ships in this as well. Long live ChanBaek and MarkHyuck!
It's sad that it's short but everything was straightforward and nice. Sometimes all I wanna read is about the beautiful relationship of the main characters without beating around the bush to much, this fits perfectly well for I was looking for. It was direct with simple flashbacks here and there about how they developed feelings for each other.
Loved the way Lucas confessed :) 'Twas so sweet. The confusion it brought to Ten, making him wonder whether Lucas is serious or not. I kinda love those moments when a character's in denial then gets the awaited answers to all of the questions he's got. Beautiful!
Chapter 3: Omg!!! It was hot cute and amazing at the same time! Babe, I love it, more one shots plez, Lucas is just... wow ;)
And wayv dornan was funny addition too lol
Thank you for that!
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