✶✰✶ FACEBOOK✶✰✶

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i know you were very confused when you read the title but i wanted something new and unusual...

i was talking with my friend on facebook when this idea come to me....i tried it with other charaters but only 2min fit or the role...

 

so 2  people met through facebook but the other had another veiw about the other one....like minho thought  that taemin is a very isolated and a bored person to be with....when taemin thought another thing about minho....one day they met somewhere and they got close...so did they know that they are facebook freinds?

read to know ^_^ 

Foreword

annyeong!!!!

so guys it have been almost one week i didn't be here

so i wanted come back with new fanfic...

i don't know how much it will take but i can tell it won't be longer then 3 or 4 chapters

oh i really should thank my friend...unfortunately she don't have a compte here because of her older  brother but i will see what i can do...i will help her ^_^

see you soon !

 


 

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MoroccanBlackDragon #1
Chapter 2: u u u u oh u
u are ... DAMN! I love u!
CAN I KISS THOSE GOLDEN FINGERS!
me truly lob u
me sad
me don't wanna go to school
me wanna read Shinygirl fics TT TT
me is so damn unlucky
LadyThyrsa #2
The plot was really good, but you have made lots of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes:
It's a 'rollercoaster' not a 'road coaster' and a rollercoaster isn't a game.
Also you can't shorten 'number' into 'num', because it confuses a lot of people.
Ow and I don't know if it's a typo or not, but it's 'account' and not 'accound'
And 'i' in the meaning of 'me' has to be capatalized into 'I'.
You made a lot of mistakes in present and past tenses so be sure to always write in either past or present, but not both.
Names have to be capatalized too and after a ',' there has to be a space before you start typing the next word.
You also used the '...' too many times in this story. You can easily replace them by a '?' or '.'

I know this sounds like I'm lecturing you, but I am only trying to help :D
I really did like the story!! It was very unique and thorough thought of ^^
If you work on you writing you're going to be a great author :3
Ari-chan123 #3
hmm this sounds interesting, update soon ^_^
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