Reviewer: KYUholic @ Choco Carnival Review Shop

1. Poster (--)

-  No poster means no points. You can put up an image or anything instead.

2. Title (8)

- I like the title, but it didn’t quite catch my attention. Try capitalizing all of the first letters of the words on the title except the prepositions and linking verbs 

3. Plot (13)

- I can’t say the story is unique, but it interested me. I like the plot.

4. Spelling and Grammar (18)

- I found some grammatical errors regarding the subject-verb agreement, capitalizing the first letter of the first words in a sentence, using hyphen, using comma and periods. Be sure next time, and please be careful to avoid confusion. You can always recheck them, or use Microsoft Word before putting it in AFF.

5. Prologue/Trailer/Character Introduction (13)

- I’ll take the description as your prologue, since you don’t have any. I think it would be better if you’ll describe the characters more, introduce them to the readers.

6. Flow of the story (9)

- I love the story! I gave it 9 because some scenes were kind of unpredictable, but anyway, I love the story! JHoping for a sequel.

7. Overall Enjoyment (20)

- I did enjoy, so I gave it a perfect score. I hope for a sequel! Haha, if you did have or planning to, please drop by my wall to inform me! Kkk~ I super love it! It was a cute story, mixed with drama ( One of my favorite genres plus I enjoy writing dramas). You’re a great writer! Keep it up! 

Reviewer Remarks: 

- Just try to be more careful next time, try to be more descriptive and you’re on the go! 

Total: 81. It would have been higher if you had a poster >< Anyway, congratulations!