When The Wind Stops Blowing

Description

Wheein accidentally bumped into a dilemma when applying for a job at Daijin Corporation, yet this was when she found out the truth about herself and went on the journey with her beloved.

Foreword

Center Wheesa, side Moonsun and other couples necessary to develop main plot & relationships.

I may change the rate depending on how my writing’s progress since no matter how I want to enjoy Wheesa so bad, I’ve never written before :(, and this is even my very first time written a fic. Therefore please feel free to comment your thoughts so that I can take in and make it better.

Everything in this including characters, names, places are not true, just my imagination, if you’ve seen it somewhere else it's just mere coincidence.

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windflowers- #1
Chapter 3: ok, dude i finally read it.
this is an interesting plot, and i wanna know what happens next. also wheesa's relationship is a fun dynamic!
hurry up and continue thissss
NightRainbow #2
Chapter 3: Interesting plot so far, I'm anticipating how it will go. Please update soon!
Fengxian #3
Chapter 1: I like your portrayal of a hard working confident Wheein going for what she wants. Her interaction with the mechanic was funny and embarrassing lol.

As far as your writing goes, you have good potential. Some things I would suggest is to keep your tense the same through the entire story. You tend to switch between past tense and present. I would suggest picking one of the two to keep your story more uniform and also because it can confuse the reader.

Another tip is to start a new paragraph every time a character talks. Having quotations jumbled up in one paragraph makes the story seem cluttered. Plus it’s a grammar rule to start a new paragraph every time you have someone speak.
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