Trip To The Sunflower Field

Description

Kim Jongin doesnt even know if he should feel blessed or opposite of it when he know the guy who likes to pick him is his older brother. The bottom line of it, he get to know his real father which he really wish since the young age. He hope that this reunion would bring him happiness instead of hell because his parents suggest that they will live in the same roof and not to forget Kim Jongdae will be living with him. Jongin cant even bear to think about his normal every day life!

 

Foreword

Hi everyone, i hope you enjoy reading Trip To The Sunflower Field! Sooooo in this story, our cutie patootie Kim Jongin is 15 years old and our rockstar Kim Jongdae is 17 years old.

 

 

 

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godspeed1
#1
hey there!! here because of the family tag AND the sunflower in your title :")) and i think this kind of story is best presented with present tense but if you're still looking to improve, past tense tend to be a better place to start from. i notice that most people find it easier writing in past tense.