SIX.

[ completed ] Ambiguous

He was 21; she was 19.


“Nayeon, you’re awake?”


“…”


“You sleepyhead, don’t go back to sleep. Eat something first.”


“Why are you still here? Let me sleep.”


“You’re sick.”


“That’s why, let me sleep, you’re noisy today.”


“It’s way past dinnertime.”


“Then go eat.”


“I did.”


“That’s goo- don’t pull me up!”


“I made porridge, eat.”


“I don’t want to, let me sleep.”


“No. You have to eat so you can take your medicine!”


“No, go away!”


“Stop being a brat and stop kicking me, I’m not going away!”


“And I’m not taking any medicine.”


“You have to!”


“Don’t snatch the blanket away!”


“Then eat, you brat!”


“I’m a sick person!”


“You seem energetic to me now. Look at how tightly you’re holding onto the blanket.”


“Good, then I don’t have to take my medicine right?”


“Im Nayeon, don’t turn your body away from me.”


“Goodnight!”


“Nayeon…”


“She’s asleep.”


“No, she’s not.”


“She is, so let her sleep.”


“Nayeon, I’m giving you one last chance.”


“For what?”


“Sit up, take your porridge and your medicine.”


“You know I hate medicine!”


“So? Take it so you will be well soon. Don’t make me drag you out from your bed.”


“I dare you to.”


“…”


“Wha- LET ME DOWN!”


“Let’s go to the living room, I will feed you.”


“MARK TUAN!”


“Stop moving about or I’m going to drop you.”


“Do it then.”


“Alright.”


“Wait, are you really- Ouch!”


“You gave me permission. Stop being dramatic, I dropped you on the couch.”


“It still hurts… ouch, my . Is this how you treat a sick person?


“If you’ve listened, I wouldn’t have resort to this. Now, open your mouth, ah.”


“…”


“Don’t sulk, open your mouth.”


“Ah.”


“Good girl, now eat and get well soon so I can focus on my projects. My groupmates are probably going to kill me if this continues. It’s been three days in a row.”


“You’re talkative today, focus on feeding me please.”


“I was being concerned. You should’ve listened to your parents and not stay in the dormitory.”


“I can take care of myself.”


“Yeah right.”


“Shut up.”
 


Okay, this chapter has a totally different style from any of the ones before. It's not descriptive and the actions are all in the dialogue. I've always enjoyed writing in this style. It seems short but it's not easy to include the actions in the conversation. I don't know if this is good enough, just treat this as an experiment piece! Just another four chapters to go and honestly, I'm pretty excited for the upcoming chapters! If you get what I mean. :)

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cece_mytlover
#1
Chapter 10: I love this story, it was a joy to read!!
jellieeh
#2
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!?
Yeah i'm confused because I just finished all the chapters now and I realized you finished writing them on my birthday??
omg why didnt I have time to read this sooner TTATT
But yeah it's a really good story, the oneshots are in different style so it's not boring and too long to read ^^ I love every chapter but the one with the most interesting style is the one with only dialogue lol
And needless to say the funniest ones are the trio included ones lol
I love how you developed the story, but as a whole, I wish there are more chapter focusing on the romance between Mark and Nayeon, because beside the first 3 chapters, most of them are about one of the two bestfriends worried about the other :< i know it meant they care for each other, but it would be awesome if there are more fluff >/////<
Thank you for writing this, please continue because you know how I love all your other stories XD
Hanyeon01Lover
#3
Chapter 10: Wow i really loved it i wish you could make an extra chapyers abt fluffy markyeon
Hanyeon01Lover
#4
Chapter 9: Wow i really loved it specially when nayeon confessed to mark in the end of chapter but i feel sad abt them that they aren't together
Hanyeon01Lover
#5
Chapter 8: Omg author nim i'm really happy and excited to read the last chapters and i really loved this chapter specially when mark defended her
Hanyeon01Lover
#6
Chapter 7: I'm really happy author nim and so excited for the next chapter and thank you so much for the video that you made
kpopluver3
#7
Chapter 6: AWWW this story is just to cute. literally just discover this and breeze through reading it. this story have so much fluff that i just cant deal with it. anyway cant wait to read more, this story is just so cute
Hanyeon01Lover
#8
Chapter 6: Yeah i'm also excited to know what had been btwn mark and jb
Hanyeon01Lover
#9
Chapter 5: I'm really waiting for the update
Hanyeon01Lover
#10
Chapter 5: Wow i'm really happy for them and their long friendship i'm waiting for the time they their true feelings for each other