Shhh baby...they don't know...

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Description

Junmyeon is in a secret relationship with the maknae of the group ... Everything goes perfect until they almost get caught by the paparazzi and Suho realize that he put in danger his and all the members career.

Foreword

Heyy guys!! I just want to tell you that english is not my first language so if there will be some grammar mistakes feel free to correct me. I will do my best to write as correctly as i can... Enjoy ?❤!!

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-UglyPinkMachine- #1
Chapter 1: This is a cute story, even if it's angsty and I suffered a lot with Sehun when Suho's so upset. I think that it's generally written with a lot of feelings and that it's obvious how much effort you put into it! In my opinion you could have written it out more to lessen the rather rushed atmosphere. Grammarwise the story has a few weak spots, but since you're no native english speaker (neither am I, so I totally feel you!) I am not too bothered by it. Maybe it would help to search for someone to beta-read your stories, but I don't feel pressured, I don't want to give you rude advice!
All in all I absolutely like the idea of this story and I would definitely read a sequel! Thank you for writing and sharing this story <3
BabyBugsy #2
Chapter 1: Exactly you must continue this story hahahaha...
Poor our leader. Please be strong. Dont be zhaking with this matter.. Fighting!! Please take a good care for our leader uri maknae ~^^
fizzmyeon94 #3
Chapter 1: Thissss,, it definitely need a sequel n with a happy ending too.. Really nice story u got here.. Thank u ^^
Dee_wizzard #4
Chapter 1: Goshhh i love it????? i deadly love itttt!!!!!!
BabyBugsy #5
Looking forwards for this story...
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