(Under Major Revision) The SHINee World 2.0

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I'm changing the plot of this story from it's original (depressing) course. I'll put up a blog post about the changes soon. To my subscribers, I'm sorry for this drastic change. I promise the new plot will be more interesting. (Maybe a couple of rated chapters *suggestive, not , sorry*) So if you want to stick around for the changes, thanks for being patient, if not. Sorry I shot down your interest. *sniffs* Hopefully, more people will like the new version of this story better. Not so much as "girl is jealous of another girl and tries to steal her boyfriend" drama, but "coming of age" drama (hence the mention of rated chapters....*shifty eyes*).

So, heads up! XD

Foreword

To start with, here's the prologue of the new story.

Prologue- Here We Go Again

 

Jaylenn Calvin pulled her Dodge Avenger into the driveway, killed the engine, and stepped out, slinging her backpack filled with homework over her shoulder.

"I'm home!" she announced as she stepped into the house.

Her mom, Miranda Calvin, stepped in from the backyard. "Did you have a nice day at school?"

"Yep. Last day before spring break. All we did was party. Food, games, pictures, and all that good stuff. Plus a whole lot of homework. Senior year and I'm still not off the hook." She threw her bag on the couch. "Taemin hasn't called me today though. I'm worried about him. Has he called here?"

"No. Sorry." Then Miranda Calvin smiled. "But something came in the mail for you. Go check in your room."

Jaylenn grinned widely then raced upstairs to her room. She opened the door, and there, on her bed, was a medium sized cardboard box. She jumped onto her bed and looked at the postage sticker. Sure enough, it was from SHINee's address in Seoul. Frantically, she scoured her nightstand drawer for a pair fo scissors, then ripped the wedges along the top of the box, splitting the tape covering the flaps.

Inside the box was a picture album filled with pictures of the boys and everyone at SM and other various places, a new sketchbook and art supplies (no doubt from Taemin's hyung, Taesun), two new memory cards for her camera, a framed portrait of Taemin and Taesun along with several other portraits and drawings, a new outfit complete with high tops and accesories, a SHINee World Japan Arena Tour concert t-shirt signed by the boys, all five versions of their Sherlock album (one with each member on the cover), and a large envelope.

Ignoring the other items, she took out the envelope and cut it open. Inside was a note from Taemin written in hangul that said "You know what to do with these! ^^ <3" and six tickets and six backstage passes for the SMTown concert in Chicago, Illinois that week.

Jaylenn picked her iPhone (that Taemin had sent the money for her to buy) and speed dialed Christine Dellacroux's number.

"Jaylenn?! Are you at home?!" Christine had been staying at Jaylenn's house ever since last summer.

"Yes!"

"Did  you open the box?!"

"Yes!" Jaylenn's voice rose to a squeal. "Did you get one?!"

"Go look in my room!"

Jaylenn ran out and into the guest room where Christine had been staying. On her bed was another box with another envelope containing another ticket and backstage pass.

"What about Stacy, Amy, and Maya?"

"I'm here at Stacy's freaking out over theirs!"

"But wait. If you four already have  your tickets and passes, why did Taemin send me six of each?"

"Hey, Jay?"

"Yeah?"

"I think you'd better call Alyson and your other friends from school." Jaylenn could hear a smile in her voice. "I think the boys have something big planned out."

So...It was the start of another crazy year for them, wasn't it?

Jaylenn smiled as she, Christine, and the other three SHINee Girls agreed in unison.

"SHINee's back."

a/n....back, back, back. Okay, never mind. Sorry for the Sherlock refrence. XD So, I hope that captured (or re-captured) your interest.

WhiteRoseFlame
First chapter of the revised version is up!!! XD Enjoy!

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Dubuforeveralone
#1
Very adorable!! Kyaaa~ jaylenn and Taemin are soo cute together!! :3
Dubuforeveralone
#2
Hehehe...I is excited for the next chapter. :P
daydreamergirl11
#3
I loved the new update!!!!
daydreamergirl11
#4
Uh Oh the guys are in trouble!!! To keep things hidden they should have at least made sure to call the girls!!!
daydreamergirl11
#5
Wow a lot of stuff is happening...moving,decorating,not just SHINee but EXO and f(x) wow!!!!!!
Dubuforeveralone
#6
I am so looking forward to this fic. ^^
daydreamergirl11
#7
This sounds like a really good story!!!! I am looking forward to when you write some more!!!!