xvi.

Experiment 00

The sky had rolled into dark purple and blue by the time the doctors told Yixing to bring Yifan back to his room. They gave them a few more minutes in the center courtyard, the taller man laying with his back against the grass, with Yixing’s head perched on his chest. They stared into the starless night, the moon just out of sight, but it glowed brightly. “I loved space and galaxies when I was a kid,” Yifan said softly. “I wanted to live in space. In a nebula.”

Yixing turned and put his hands flat on Yifan’s chest, then rested his chin upon them. He was silent to make the other continue.

“I had so many books about space, and I couldn’t even read them. My mom always read them to me. I’m sure she still has all that knowledge like I do.”

“How old were you?”

“When?”

“When they took you.”

Yifan glanced down at him, then back up into the black sky. “I was seven.”

Yixing moved, laying beside him, and took his hand. He placed Yifan’s onto his chest, and the taller could feel his heart pumping. “So you really do remember it all. That’s so young, but still, you’d remember.”

“I’m sure you were around that age, too.”

“I wish I could remember. I feel like my whole life has been taken from me. Like I’m missing a piece.”

“You’d be angry too.”

Yixing sat up and smiled, just as a doctor came to bring them back to the labs. “Who’s to say I’m not?”


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ChiaToma
#1
Chapter 21: Aww I love this work
Short and sweet and full of so much
Looking forward to more
ZeldaZeng #2
Chapter 21: Happy Birthday!!! Thanks for the update. So hot!
kkeuchi
#3
Chapter 21: hhhhh happy birthday~~~ Hope your seventeenth birthday was a good one~~ ^ ^

These are always so short but there is so much emotion and feeling in it. I've probably said this in like every single comment I've ever posted on this story but it's always true!! Their relationship is such an interesting one and I'm always feeling anxious. I'm always just waiting though.
ZeldaZeng #4
Chapter 20: Thank you for the update.
They might be short, but I love the emotions that are packed in.
From the love that's developing between them, which is blossoming into a more universal love for everyone around them, to the hope that is present now that they know that Tao has already successfully escaped.
Love it!!!!!!!! Thank you again.
Although, I have to admit, I'm selfishly in it for Yifan and Yixing. As long as they come out of it happy, I'll be satisfied.
Can't stop smiling as Yifan only dotes on Yixing and no one else. Soooo cute! But hopefully everyone else gets a happy story too, or at lease a bit of action.
This story is awesome. Supporting you all the way, no matter how it turns out!
kkeuchi
#5
Chapter 20: Wow that last line was amazing. It was short, (but i don't even care) yet lots of emotion to be felt. Yifan isn't even sure what's real and what's not real but he knows that he doesn't want to lose Yixing hhhh
kkeuchi
#6
Chapter 18: Hhhhh these two chapters were very disheartening as you could see Yifan dreaming of Yixing's future, a future of endless posibilites and what-ifs. And Yixing even mentioning to Junmyeon about his past life, thinking that he could meet his mother. But at the same time, you can see how selfless both Yixing and Yifan are, thinking of other people and not themselves. This is such a slow build up that I'm completely loving, you can evolve your characters more but there will always be the underlying tension and fear between them and the scientists.
ZeldaZeng #7
I've been following this story since the beginning. So glad you updated. Seriously appreciate it.
Just some ideas I had for the future of this story:
They both give up their powers to be together, except their captors refuse to release them even after their sacrifices. Then they realize that their powers actually come from their souls and they become even more powerful, fueled by their love. At which point Yixing's healing powers restore everyone's memory, resulting in a revolt. Yifan can maybe gain some super strength, or transform into a dragon, or command a dragon spirit or something, and lead the rebellion.
Just some thought. Would love a happy ending. But all up to you. Whatever you decide, I will be happily anticipating..
Love you!
Love fanxing!
Thanks again.
kkeuchi
#8
Chapter 16: Yixing's last line is gonna haunt me forever it's so good.

I think it's gonna continue with Yifan getting a chance and escaping, yeah he wants to take Yixing with him but he doesn't. (as if the scientistics would let him go that easily) And basically my lovely fanxing is torn apart. Yifan is racked with guilt since he was unable to take Yixing as well. But Yixing isn't sad or upset, he's just glad that Yifan got away and could see the galaxy whenever he wanted like he's always wanted. (THEY'RE NOT EVEN UNDER THE SAME SKY BECAUSE YIXING CANT SEE THE SKY *SOBS*)

And for me, it ends there. Kind of a bittersweet ending where nothing goes right for fanxing but hhhh I'm just feeling melancholy these days ^^

(p.s you can't just ask where I think this is going and NOT expect me to comment and word vomit about my thoughts)
kkeuchi
#9
Chapter 14: Don't apologize for only posting a single chapter!! I can very much relate to how you're feeling, and it's hard. Truth be told I appreciate every single chapter you put out for us and I don't even mind if you have no direction. I just hope it's a distraction for you to get your mind off of things.

(ps I like how they do everything together even though everyone else is like no, we shouldn't allow this to happen. and an excited puppy fan is cute.)
kkeuchi
#10
Chapter 13: I have no idea where this story is going but honestly I don't even care I just need fanxing in my life.

Can I just say, I really like how in this chapter you don't have them talking to each other?? Hear me out, it's less about what they can say to each other but more about the physical affirmation that the other isn't a dream/illusion. They're right in front of them and they're not going to be ripped away from them (at least not yet anyways) It's more about the physical actions and their responses say more than anything they could ever say.

Or at least that's how I'm feeling about all this.

Tbh I'm pretty satisfied with the end of this chapter, in a way I think it feels far more intimate? But however you decide, I'll be here, reading it!!

See you next update!! It was simply amazing like always!!