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Hi all, I started on a new story tiled 'Dear Blue' and I'm sharing it with you guys here because it focuses on human nature as well. I hope you all can check the story out (angst, drama, romance, surfer!au). By the way, it features Baekhyun!

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lawliam
#1
Chapter 1: I really like it. This story reminds me how we all have choices. But our choices have consequences, and in the end we are choosing the consequence we prefer more instead the choice we truly want. Idk, is that make any sense? I'm kinda sad, since I'm afraid that maybe I'm slowly becoming like that.
vampwrrr
#2
Chapter 1: I loved this. It was short, but poignant.
k-imjonghyun
#3
wTF THE PROLOGUE OMFG IM SHOOK
mizzinformation #4
Chapter 1: Short but well written. I enjoyed this one shot :)
BF_minwoo61995
#5
Chapter 2: Awww.. it sad. When status and wealth become the unbreakable wall between them
MissMong24 #6
Chapter 1: This is a really really well written short story. Wow. That was quite a lot to take in. Lowkey didnt expect that angsty turn after reading how he actually swore at her. The part where you wrote about dreams really hit me hard, as someone struggling to figure out if the path I’m choosing is actually the right one.

I am actually in love with the ending because it’s so abrupt and leaves the readers to interpret the rest of the story however we want because somewhere in the fictional world, the life of Yena and Sehun goes on beyond this short chapter.

Overall really beautiful and I really enjoy your style of writing!
Sickxxx
#7
Chapter 2: YAS
bohubear
#8
I didn't expect that angsty turn, although the abrupt end does give us the chance to imagine what happened after she learned his name: perhaps she went on with the dinner, he quit, she ended up becoming fond of her future spouse and that's where her conjunction with Sehun ended. Or perhaps she ended up ditching it, she ended up finding a way to be with him. It's all up to us how we see the glass: half empty or half full.
I did enjoy the story, despite not enjoying the situation. I'm not a fan of abiding by what the family wants, but in a way, I could see where she's coming from. I appreciated the realism of it all, how the timing was horrible, how it's not shown to us what path she takes, how everything is bitter sweet, although it's also quite interesting that the one time she sits to talk with Sehun is when she needs him the most: had she approached him earlier, perhaps things would've been much more different.
Overall, a nice and sweet short story that truly portrays how unexpected are the ties we form in our lives. Congratulations!
AcidPop
#9
Chapter 1: Wow so good TT_TT
Sickxxx
#10
Chapter 1: Please update more don't make me cry like this ???