Doll house of the Kim.

Description

Junmyeon meets a silver hair guy outside a club while waiting for his older brother, Jongdae, to bring his drunk friend, Luhan, out.

The Kim family house it's not that warm but the 4 Kim brothers still have a strong bond.

Foreword

I'm not that good at descriptions so I don't know how to describe my short story... sorry about that. But well, here we go, I hope you all like it. I will be adding more characters as they appear. Please comment, I like to see what people think of what I write :) 

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dulcimer_pL
#1
Chapter 4: I like the Kim brothers relation and a sassy Jumyeon . Update soon pls :))
ephemeral24
2403 streak #2
Chapter 4: ohhhhh... I'm glad I left a comment then! HAHAHA

anyway, there really is something between Yifan and Jongdae, not just Jongdae, but with his group of friends too! and what was Lay being a douche for? he gave no reaction on what Jun initially said but snakes it out to Jongdae!!! wow, I'd want to kill him if I were Jun...

good thing Kai was there in time when Yixing was apologizing to Jun, coz I felt like something stupid could've happened if no one interrupted that...

what's with Mrs. Kim tho??? I mean, Jun is her son! and she's like a full botch on her!!!
ephemeral24
2403 streak #3
Chapter 3: I just found this! and I hope you'll continue this story! it's really interesting and I'm dying to discover more of it...

due to the description of Jun's brothers, I initially thought that they didn't have a good relationship, but I was wrong! they just have different personalities but they still love each other! i mean, aren't all siblings like that? HAHAHA

and it's even more amusing that Jun is the princess of the family! HAHAHAHA Jongdae dropping by his table at lunch to make sure he has the right persons around him... tbh, I'm most fascinated by Jongdae's personality here! he's perfect for the older protective brother stereotype! HAHAHA and idk, I just really love his character here... obnoxiously showing off his car when dropping off Jongin? embarrassing Jongin in front of his friends? HAHAHA istg, I won't be surprised if in one chapter, those two will get in a fistfight! :)))

and Jongin too, Jongin may be younger than Jun, but still found it in himself to threaten his hyung's friends just so they know what could happen if they screw him up... and how he abandoned Taemin and his game when Jun came... wow, Jun is well taken care of! :)

it's interesting how Jun regards Kris with such hatred, specially after knowing that he's one of Yeol's ex-friends... and on the other side, we have Kris who seems desperate to have just a bit of Jun's attention! I bet he was interested in him the moment he saw him outside the bar... I wonder what made him disappear into thin air when Jongdae was coming tho... did they fight before? coz if that was the case I don't think he still would approach Jun at school, but he still did... tho, I'm sure he does know Jongdae, could it be that he's afraid of Jongdae? guy's got reputation you know...

anyway, I do hope you continue this!!! and I hope it's KrisHo HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
suhomomojjang #4
Is this gonna be a Krisho fic or a Sulay fic?
ElenaVivanco01
#5
I've just found this story and I love it, I love that everyone protects and loves baby JunMyeon <3
I'm excited to see more Krisho and the appearance of Layho <3
Please continue it, it's very cool ;D
Laulaura #6
Chapter 1: Love the story continu like this!!