Follow Her Till The End

Description

She met her at one of the darkest nights.

she knew she shouldn't, but she craved for meeting her again.

 

 

 


 

Foreword

I just want to try out writing a darker themed fanfic so here it is *slightly ashamed

(It would be my pleasure if you could drop a comment, subscribe or even upvote for me ^_^ Thank you *finger heart

 

 

 

So hey, I am back!

 

 

 

 

Moocherry
Just wanna drop a hi here! did not realised it has been a year since I started this fic; in return I wrote nearly 1000 words (new achievement unlocked woohoo! *self-celebrations*) in the latest chapter! It'd be great if you could give me some feedbacks since I doubt my writing after so long...

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cjmoo_ #1
Chapter 4: Hmm well, at least Yongsun still remembers Byul! Byul's such an intriguing character. Who else would Byul be looking for hmm... I'm curious about that 'unknown feeling of void lingering' on Yongsun's part. Looking forward to the next chapter! I think your writing's alright, with the right amount of dlaiogue and good pacing. :)
cjmoo_ #2
Chapter 3: Wow. I initially thought the part after the line 'The following events happened in a link of eye;' was a little awkward because there was so much gap between what happened to Yongsun and when her friends were hugging her, and then later on you showed that everything seemed hazy in Yongsun's mind and I realised that the 'awkward part' was actually Yongsun's memory being erased away and then I'm in awe :D Good job there!
radmoorie
#3
Chapter 4: very intriguing story is it .
Benjiro
#4
Chapter 2: Yong are you killing people to see moon again??
aila123 #5
Chapter 4: You write beautifully,
soo yong still recognize byul after those years.
I will wait for your next update author nim.
Chuby23 #6
Chapter 1: Can't wait for the next chapter
aila123 #7
Chapter 3: this is interesting.
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 2: Looking forward to reading more!
4dwaffle
#9
Chapter 1: A vampire? Wow i loved it °~°
laviniasarah16 #10
Chapter 1: Nice concept.