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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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““If everybody minded their own business,” the Duchess said, in a hoarse growl, “the world would go round a deal faster than it does.

– The Duchess; Alice's Adventures in Wonderland

A bit short but here it is! Teaser for the Duchess plotline <3

 

the story

author's corner

clubes headquarters

—  cairo, egypt; 19.7.2017, 13:00

  "Where are you bringing me, exactly?" 

  The same question was repeated for the third time that afternoon, when Minjung found herself being whisked suddenly away from an important meeting to the CARDS Branch in Cairo, ushered by a frazzled agent who clearly was someone not meant to be frazzled. It was a bad occassion to disappear in a blink of an eye, simply because the foreign secretary of Egypt was there and serious matters were being discussed. It seemed, however, the future of the world was at stake, because a man she had only seen hovering around her superior's desk in Turkey was in front of her, muttering urgent instructions in her ear.

  And so, the car.

  Honestly, she expected a lack of response as well during the road trip. There were places to go, apologies and reparations to be made, all of which were fulfilled in the span of the forty-five minutes needed for travelling. However, now that they were in the CARDS building and rushing towards god-knows-what-else again, Minjung felt that she had a right to know things.

  "You'll know soon, ma'am." And for the third time, the same answer came, quick as bulletfire. Sighing in exasperation, the woman frowned. "Well, then, for goodness' sake, hurry up if we don't have much time." 

  A glance from the man, who might possibly be Carroll's secretary. "My apologies, ma'am. With all due respect, things are running as quickly as they possibly could." 

  Another frown. Normally, that would have hastened the process, but at CARDS, things seemed to run at another pace. How...disappointing. 

  It was at this moment that Minjung was seriously contemplating just changing and remaking the entire logistics system in CARDS when the agent finally led her to where she was supposed to be. Which was a room tucked away at some random corner of the building, filled with a table, a chair, a laptop, some papers, and a coffee machine. 

  "In here, please, ma'am." As soon as she entered, Minjung could feel the door slam shut behind her, rather than hear it. Giving another irritated sigh - had these idiots never recieve guests of high calibres? - she approached the table, which, she noticed, was made of steel, shackled to the floor, and gathered the sheef of papers, starting to read them.

  "Ah, General Romonova. Excellent; you are here." 

  Inexperience would have caused Minjung to promptly jump out of her skin, but experience had taught her to expect nothing, and prepare for everything. Having taken a seat and crossed her legs, and failing to work the coffee machine, the woman simply looked up from her file of documents at the holo-screen which was floating in front of her, recognizing her superior's voice.

  "Of course I am here. You called, didn't you?"

  "Indeed I have." The worst thing about having meetings with Carroll, Minjung reflected, was that one could never see a face, and thus never predict any emotions to come flying one's way. "And I'm glad you came." A slight pause. "I assume...you have been briefed on the matter?"

  "I have briefed myself; yes. You seriously need to contemplate training your staff, Carroll; they have absolutely no regard for procedure."

  A chuckle. "Well, then perhaps I should put you in charge, my dear. Learn from that, ah, ancient tradition running through your veins. Right. Back on topic. Since you've read the documents, I'm not going into too much detail to further waste more of your precious time. You'll be in charge of fighting, my darling, as well as what you are best at; infiltration and stealth. Any complaints?"

  "As of yet, no." Sensing the conversation nearing an end, Minjung stood, placing her hands into her trench coat's pockets once more. "Are we done? I have more important things to do, you know."

  "Of course," Carroll said in a reassuring tone, which just made her less reassured. "But there is one more thing. Do come back at your latest convenience, please. We will be holding a formal introduction to everyone. Latest by tomorrow evening."

  At that, Minjung sent a glare towards the direction of the holo-screen. There was a tense silence, until it was finally broken curtly by her, and consequently, her heels echoing towards the door.

  "I'm a very busy woman, Carroll."

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡