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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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"I don't know if it's right in the grand scheme of things. i just know that it's what i have to do."

– Lee Saebin

 

 

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CARDS HEADQUARTERS

—  turkey; 16.7.2017, 15:00

  "You called for me...sir?" As soon as she closed the door behind her, the light emitted from the hallway was shut out; no amount of squinting could help her distinguish the fuzzy silhouette leaning against the far wall, whether it was that of a female or a male.

  Not that it mattered, however.

  "Ah, yes. Lee Saebin. Come in; do sit down." Another round of squinting was carried out, though perhaps it was the summer heat getting to her, because Saebin found her mind working rather slowly today. Heading to the chair that was offered to her, the girl slowly took a seat. 

  "Do you know who I am?"

  "You're...Carroll," She replied cautiously. "Whom they call the Head of this organization." 

  Soft laughter. "Ah yes, they tend to say that very often. Which, is true, of course, but my powers extend far beyond than that. However, we are not gathered here to talk about that. Miss Lee..." And here Carroll trailed off slightly, as if waiting for something. Indeed, not a moment afterwards, there was a knock at the door, and in came a man pushing a cart in, on which sat a tea tower, with a tea set accompanying it. After serving the two, he bowed curtly, before leaving again.

  "Perhaps some tea?" After a brief silence, Carroll offered, a small twirling of fingers which then pushed the teacup more insistently towards her. Silently, Saebin reached for the cup, and touched her lips with the warm liquid. "Excellent. I do love tea-time, you know. There is simply no greater pleasure than willing away idle hours with a cup of tea in hand and decandent sweets in the other." Another pause as the person in front of her seemed to take a sip of tea. "Do you know why I asked for you today, Miss Lee?" 

  Dutifully, Saebin shook her head as she rested her hands on the edge of her plate, still spotless due to a lack of pastry placed on it. Seemingly noticing that, another twirl of fingers caused an eclair to land gracefully on the porcelain.

  "Oh, don't be shy; help yourself. The reason I called for you, Miss Lee," And here there was a delicate cough. "Is because of a certain group that I'm interested in you joining." Another painful silence ensured, safe for the sound of silver cutlery clinking against porcelain. "No questions? Mmm, you're a quiet one. Well then, don't mind me if I start rambling on." There was another sip of tea before Carroll deemed it appropriate to start.

  "The 'group' I am to invite you to, is called Wonderland. Perhaps you may scoff at the name. It does not matter. This group will be consisted of elite fighters whom I have personally handpicked from the ranks of players, and will be under my direct command. You will carry out special missions of which I give you. Any questions thus far?" Silence. "Excellent. I'm glad we got this out of the way. Now, about certain...ah, relations..."

  There was a meaningful note on that word, and Saebin suddenly realized the implication of that word, and started. "Yes, I'm glad you understand my words. We are, talking, of course, about your mother." A wistful sigh. "Such a wonderful dear. But nonetheless, a bit of a disappointment that she decided to never contact me. However, I'm glad that she decided to finally send me a message. Through you." 

  At that, Saebin swallowed, nervousness starting to creep along her fingertips. She could feel herself being studied, sized up, whether she was worthy, at that single moment. Then Carroll chuckled, and the tension eased up. "At any rate, I have high hopes for you. Try not to, ah, let your brother down, mm?" 

  And it was then that she knew what true fear felt like. 

  

  

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡