Teaser #1

Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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So this is teaser one!! Don't ask me why I don't know uwu 

Anyways so this is before all hell breaks lose?? I'm planning on doing four teasers similar to this before moving on to character reveals and all that (if there are characters for me to work on by then haha)

Btw this is probably one of the few interactions between Lewis and Carroll I'm going to write about, so...yes! Hope you enjoy this :'D 

the story

author's corner

cards headquarters 

— turkey, 23:30 

As the last of the Council members stepped out of the room - but not without sending one last dirty look back into the meeting room, at the chair at the head of the table shrouded in shadow - and the door closed behind them, Lewis finally turned to the figure in the darkness, for the first time since the meeting was adjourned. Or rather, ended, since there was an indefinite postpone until the next one. 

"They seem displeased with your decision." 

The figure, hearing that, merely chuckled, and Lewis thought she could see the outline of fingers lacing themselves together. "Since when does the High Council ever agree with my plans, my dear Lewis?"

The secretary opened to say something, but instead pursed her lips together, as if regretting her words before they were even spoken. Carroll, upon that, chuckled again, and there was a sound of wood scraping against metal as the chair was pushed back. 

"You appear to be dissatisfied with something. Do you disagree as well?"

"Of course not," She said briskly. "But - "

"You doubt the success of my plan, then? But what a surprise. I thought you, out of all people, being the one closest to my side and had seen all the victories I had acheived, would be the one who has the most faith. I must say, I'm disappointed in you." 

At hearing that tone, Lewis' eyes grew wide with shame, and bowed her head. "M-my apologies. I am merely worried. There seemed to be...a few problems that I wanted to address in your briefings with the High Council." 

"But of course I would not disclose everything to that group of fools." There was almost a hint of surprise in the words. "Better to let them ponder on with their foolishness, and recieve sufficient shock when the moment of victory comes."

"Yes, of course," She murmured. 

"Now, I believe I had given you a mission." The sound of heeled boots echoed through the room, until they stopped in front of a chest of drawers pushed against the east wall. A section was pulled back, and a scroll of parchment was retrieved before it was placed on the long table. "Perhaps you had found your instructions vague as well. This will help you."

Lewis felt the sting of the blow, and bit her lips, before raising her head with a newfound will shining in her eyes. "Sire, I had offended you once, I would not do it again. I promise to carry your wishes exactly as they are dictated, and I will not fail you." 

"Good. But take the scroll nonetheless." The tone was now kinder. "There are instructions that would aid you on your task, and, ah - " Lewis thought she could detect an amused smile at the edge of the words, and a sliver of moonlight shown through the window, just enough to let her see a slender hand pluck a thorned flower from the jar of roses on top of the chest of drawers. "Take this as well, as compliments from Carroll."

The secretary gathered the items somewhat hesitantly, and hearing no more words from the head of CARDS, bowed silently, and left. 

Eyes on the retreating form of the secretary, Carroll chuckled with amusement at her sliver of weakness shown, before turning back to the roses. The slender hand took one of the blossoms again, and twisted it between the fingers, then brought it to the shadow-obscured face, on which a smirk was slowly spreading across.

"I hope you enjoy my game, gentlemen." 

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡