Struggles and Revelations

Boys Over Flower 2
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“Sae Ron, dear?” Sae Ron’s mother called. “Your friends are here to visit you.” She continued.

After hearing that her friends were there, Sae Ron immediately ran for the door and went down to meet them. She was especially excited to see a certain person but when she finally saw her visitors, her smile automatically disappeared. The person she really wanted to see was not there.

                “Yah! What’s with the frowning?” Jin Hwan exclaimed.

                “Is Joo Hyuk with you?” Sae Ron asked right away and all her friends started to look away.

The living room was starting to get awkward because of the silence. Sae Ron’s mother might have noticed it too and started to eye everyone in the room. She thought that something was off and she couldn’t shake the feeling that it concerned about her daughter’s strange behaviours lately. She needed to know.

                “So!” Sae Ron’s mother broke the silence and everyone jumped in surprise. “Why don’t you guys go sit and I’ll make something for you to eat and drink.” She added. “Yoo Jung, dear? Why don’t you come and help me?” She asked and Yoo Jung nodded and the both of them went into the kitchen.

Jin Hwan was worried for his childhood friend. He knew that Sae Ron has some mental illness when they were young and he couldn’t stop thinking that her illness might have come back. He needed to look out for her more and make sure that she wouldn’t do something stupid.

“Yah! If you’re sick, you should have told me! I could have brought you home myself.” Jin Hwan accused.

                “I’m fine. Really.” Sae Ron assured. “So stop nagging already.” She added, smirking at him.

                “When it comes to Sae Ron, Jin Hwan sure is protective.” Chan Woo commented and Jin Hwan flinched.

                “Of course! She’s my childhood friend.” Jin Hwan stated proudly.

Everyone was chatting and laughing happily but Sae Ron couldn’t help herself feeling sad because Joo Hyuk wasn’t there. Her friends noticed her saddened expression and they was silence once more.

                “Stop that.” Hyun Hyeong exclaimed. “Stop thinking things that would only upset you.” He added.

                “Hyeongie’s right.” Chan Woo agreed. “It would only worsen your sickness.” He continued.

                “I couldn’t help it. I.. I wanted to see him. But..” Sae Ron was in the verge of tears.

                “Sae Ron-ah..” Jin Hwan was feeling sorry.

Jin Hwan was upset. He couldn’t do anything for her. He knew that Sae Ron liked Joo Hyuk but Joo Hyuk liked someone else. It was not like he could make Joo Hyuk change his feelings for Sae Ron. It would only ruin his friendship with him but he needed to do something, even a small thing that would cheer her up.

Meanwhile, in the kitchen:

                “Thanks for helping, Yoo Jung-ah.” Sae Ron’s mother exclaimed.

                “This is nothing, auntie.” Yoo Jung smiled sweetly. “I’m happy to help especially for my friend.” She added.

                “How nice of you.” Sae Ron’s mother praised and paused. “Yoo Jung-ah..” Sae Ron’s mother hesitated.

                “Auntie? What is it?” Yoo Jung noticed that Sae Ron’s mother was trying to ask something.

                “It’s Sae Ron.” Sae Ron’s mother started. “Lately, I noticed that she was acting very strange. When she went home last day, she looked terrified and she locked herself in her room. I couldn’t shake the feeling that her illness is coming back.” Sae Ron’s mother continued and Yoo Jung was confused hearing the last statement. “Last night, she was having a nightmare. She was shouting in her sleep and it took me a long time to wake her up.” Sae Ron’s mother continued and Yoo Jung was horrified hearing the story.

                “But she seems fine now.” Yoo Jung stated. “I’m sure it was just the fever, auntie.” She consoled.

                “Right. But I couldn’t help thinking that she might be getting bullied by someone?” Sae Ron’s mother replied and Yoo Jung knitted her eyebrows in confusion. “By any chance, do you happen to know someone named Gu So Hyun?” She asked and Yoo Jung’s eyes widened. “You know her?” She asked again.

                “She’s our schoolmate but..” Yoo Jung was still confused.

                “Really? Sae Ron was shouting that name in her nightmare.” Sae Ron’s mother exclaimed. “And there were some other things she was shouting too with the name GU SO HYUN. MAN IN BLACK. BUMBLE BEE CAR. I don’t remember the others.” Sae Ron’s mother finished. “Do you know the meaning behind my daughter’s words?” She asked.

                “Wait. What did she say? BUMBLE BEE CAR?” Yoo Jung was frozen. “No way. It can’t be.” She kept on thinking.

                “Yoo Jung, dear? What’s the matter?” Sae Ron’s mother noticed her troubled expression.

Yoo Jung couldn’t hear anything. Her world have been frozen ice solid. Her head started to process a lot of things at the same time but she decided to check and confirm one thing first.

                “I’m so sorry, auntie.” Yoo Jung started. “I have to go home. There’s something urgent that I have to do.” She continued. “Is it okay if I leave first?” Yoo Jung asked.

                “Yes. Yes, of course.” Sae Ron’s mother replied.

 Yoo Jung immediately went out from the kitchen and headed to her friends in the living room. When she got to her friends, she noticed that the atmosphere was gloomy but it quickly went away when they saw her.

                “I’m sorry. I have to go first.” Yoo Jung explained.

                “Why? What’s wrong? Is everything okay?” Chan Woo asked, standing up.

                “It’s nothing. I forgot something back home so I’ll just drop by there to get it.” Yoo Jung answered.

                “Oh. Okay then. Be safe!” Sae Ron hugged her friend good bye.

Yoo Jung quickly went home. As soon as she arrived at the gate, she couldn’t see the car that usually parks at the old garage and she felt more worried. It was her favourite car since she was little, a BUMBLE BEE design car.

                “Welcome home, young miss.” The maid greeted.

                “Where’s mom?” Yoo Jung asked her.

                “She’s not here at the moment, miss.” The maid answered.

                “Okay. You can leave.” Yoo Jung dismissed the servant. “I’ll use this time to look around. It’s a good thing that mom’s not here.” Yoo Jung thought and went out from the house.

Yoo Jung went to roam around. Her family was quite wealthy too so their house was quite big and the grounds were also wide which Yoo Jung found to be irritating since she was supposed to look around the vast area. She was nearing the very far end of the grounds when she spotted her favourite car, the bumble bee design car. She ran towards it and found herself in front of an old ware house. She started to walk towards the building when she heard her mother’s voice.

                “Where do you think you’re going?” Yoo Jung suddenly froze after hearing the cold voice of her mother.

                “I.. I was just..” Yoo Jung stammered. “I was just wondering where my favourite car had went and I found it here. “ Yoo Jung answered and her mother eyed her suspiciously.

                “Oh, is that so?” Her mother smiled and it brought shiver in Yoo Jung’s body. “I ordered somebody to park it here since it was old and rusty. We may not be able to use it anymore.” She explained. “And you shouldn’t roam around like this? Who knows that someone might try and kidnap you?” Yoo Jung’s mother stated and Yoo Jung flinched.

                “And why would anyone kidnap me in my own house?” Yoo Jung asked and her mother threw her a glare.

                “Who knows? Someone might break in so we should be careful.” Her mother answered coolly. “Now, why don’t we go back and have some delicious dinner?” She urged and Yoo Jung didn’t have a choice but to follow.

Back at the boys’ dormitories, Joo Hyuk just came inside their room. He went to look for So Hyun the whole day and never attended a single class. He was worried sick about So Hyun that he wasn’t able to rest from the day of So Hyun’s disappearance. And now that he was back in their room, he suddenly felt tired and sleepy.

                “Hey.” Joo Hyuk flinched by the voice from the dark. “It’s me, Jin Hwan.” And Jin Hwan went into the light.

                “Hey. What are you doing here? And where’s Hyun Hyeong?” Joo Hyuk asked.

                “He left a little while ago for us to talk.” Jin Hwan answered and Joo Hyuk raised his eyebrows in question.

                “Talk? Us? About what?” Joo Hyuk asked again, confused.

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.