Confession

Boys Over Flower 2
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For the current standing of the Amazing Race, So Hyun’s team was on the lead so far. So Hyun and her team were on the fourth station and were inside the forest. They were currently searching for the largest tree in the forest. According to the clue that the teacher (Teacher Lee from station 3) has given, they have to go in the forest and search for the largest tree for the envelopes were hidden just around it.

                “There it is!” So Hyun exclaimed, pointing just ahead of her. “The largest tree in the forest.” She declared and went straight to the tree, her team just following behind her.

So Hyun and the rest of her team started to search under the tree for the envelopes. Minhyuk and Peniel were now digging the soil hoping that they will be able to find them but they still couldn’t find anything, not even one.

                “It’s not here!” Lalisa exclaimed, frustrated.

                “They have to be here! The clue says so.” Peniel said, kicking the ground.

                “The envelopes were supposed to be AROUND the largest tree! Where the heck did they go?” Minhyuk added.

                “Something’s not right. Maybe there’s something that we’re missing.” Joo Hyuk stated.

                “What’s going on here? Where are the envelopes? According to the clue, they have to be around this tree.” So Hyun asked herself and started to search around, looking for some answers to her own question.

She could hear her teammates complaining and arguing but So Hyun kept on walking and searching around the largest tree and at the same time, she would stare at the trees around them. Then, it hit her.

                “That’s it!” So Hyun shouted making the others turn to her. “I got it.” She added.

                “What is it, So Hyun-ah?” Joo Hyuk asked.

                “Don’t you get it? The clue says that the envelopes were just around the largest tree.” She started.

                “Are you deaf? We already looked but there’s nothing around it!” Lalisa exploded.

                “Just listen!” So Hyun countered, glaring at Lalisa and she went silent. “What if the envelopes were hidden on a different tree somewhere?” So Hyun asked excitedly but her team just gave her their blank looks.

                “Yah! The clue says the LARGEST TREE.” Peniel reminded.

                “I know that. But the clue says AROUND THE LARGEST TREE right? Then it has to be another tree somewhere near the largest tree.” So Hyun explained and they all made faces of enlightenment.

                “So Hyun’s right. The teachers might have written this clue the way it is to trick us.” Joo hyuk concluded.

                “Fine. Whatever. Let’s just start searching around then.” Lalisa acknowledged.

So Hyun and the rest of her team started to search for the envelopes. They search all the trees around the largest tree and after a short while, Joo Hyuk shouted from somewhere, letting his team know that he found one envelope.

                “Alright! We got one. Time to head for the last station.” Joo Hyuk declared and they all cheered.

So Hyun and her team started to head for the lake, where the last station was located. As they were walking out from the forest, So Hyun’s team encountered Yoo Jung and her team. Yoo Jung’s team were now on their way to the 4th station. As soon as their teams have met, So Hyun and Yoo Jung both stopped from their tracks.

                “Joo Hyuk, So Hyun.” Yoo Jung greeted.

                “What now? Don’t you guys have to hurry? I mean, you’re still headed for the 4th station while my team and I are already headed for the LAST station.” So Hyun countered, smirking at her.

                “Aisshh. How dare she boast at me?” Yoo Jung thought.

                “Yah, Gu So Hyun. Don’t be so mean.” Changsub exclaimed, glaring at her but So Hyun ignored him.

                “Okay, that’s enough. We better go.” Joo Hyuk gestured to his team. “ALL of us.” This time, he gestured to Yoo Jung’s team and they all started to disperse except Yoo Jung and So Hyun who were still glaring at each other.

                “Boast all you want, Gu So Hyun. But I’ll make sure that you will lose this one.” Yoo Jung whispered to her.

                “There it is!” So Hyun exclaimed. “You finally showed me what you truly are. You’re still the backstabbing, lying and manipulative pretender that I know.” She added. “And I can’t wait to see you actually try and make us lose this race. After all, I can’t see any other way. I guess you’ll just have to see us WIN instead.” So Hyun answered boldly and went to follow her team heading for the last station.

                “Argghh! That ! I’ll make her pay for this.” Yoo Jung decided to herself.

                “Yoo Jung-ah!” Changsub called. “Where did you go? I thought you were following us. We need you. We can’t seem to find any envelopes. Maybe the clue is wrong.” He continued.

                “Now, what? Aisshhh.” Yoo Jung started to walk towards Changsub when she noticed something on the ground. “What’s this?” Yoo Jung asked and went to pick up the thing she saw. “Is this an envelope?” Yoo Jung exclaimed and opened it and she saw the puzzle pieces from the 3rd station.

                “What is it?” Changsub asked and was about to come closer.

                “It’s nothing!” Yoo Jung stopped him. “You go ahead and I’ll follow.” She insisted and Changsub went ahead. “This envelope must belong to So Hyun’s team. It’s either she or someone from her team must have dropped this.” Yoo Jung guessed. “Ha! What did you just say, Gu So Hyun? You can’t see a way for me to make you lose this race? Well, seems like I found one.” Yoo Jung exclaimed, smiling all to herself.

Somewhere in the forest:

                “Ugh! I can’t believe I actually ate that stuff!” Suhyun exclaimed.

Suhyun and the rest of Chan Woo’s team were now on their way to the 4th station. After eating the chicken feet that Teacher Lee have prepared for them, Suhyun and Jun Hue immediately threw up because it was their first time eating that exotic food. But eventually, the teacher gave them the envelope and the clue.

                “And whose fault is that, exactly?” Jun Hue asked, looking at Suhyun accusingly.

                “Stop it, you guys.” Chan Woo demanded. “Just keep walking or you’ll get left behind.” He added.

                “Are you saying that it was my fault?” Suhyun countered, ignoring Chan Woo. “Yah, whatever the menu that we’ll pick, it would still be an exotic food, you stupid.” Suhyun continued, addressing Jun Hue.

                “Aisshh. Yah, Song Suhyun. Did you just call me STUPID? Yah, did you just forget what you did to me back at the swamp? You despicable, wailing woman! How dare you call me stupid after what you did?” Jun Hue exclaimed, pissed.

                 “What? It’s true! If you’re not, then that wouldn’t have happened to you back at the swamp.” She countered.

                “Uhmm.. guys?” Chan Woo tried to catch their attention.

                “Just leave them. We have to hurry and find the largest tree. I’m sure they’ll catch up. It’s not like they couldn’t keep up with us.” Chaeyoung suggested.

                “Okay.” Chan Woo agreed. “Hey, you two.” This time he turned to Suhyun and Jun Hue who were still arguing. “Fight all you want but we will not stop walking, so you two better keep up or you’ll get separated from us.” He added. “Hello? Are you listening?” Chan Woo asked but they just ignored him and kept on arguing.

Suhyun and Jun Hue were still arguing and they didn’t notice that Chan Woo and the rest of their team were already gone from their view. They finally got separated from them and they didn’t know where they were.

                “It’s your entire fault!” Suhyun blamed.

                “What the hell? How come it’s my fault? You’re to blame too!” Jun Hue countered.

                “Aisssh. Now what do we do? We’re totally lost.” Suhyun exclaimed.

                “Damn! That’s why I hate camping.” Jun Hue burst out. “We have no choice but to continue walking. We might just find a way back to our team.” He decided and started to walk but he stopped when he heard something.

                “What?” Suhyun demanded.

                “Did you hear that?” Jun Hue asked, searching his eyes around.

                “Yah! Don’t do that! Stop scaring me already.” Suhyun ordered but she also heard something this time.

                “There’s someone or something out there, I’m telling you.” Jun Hue insisted.

Both Suhyun and Jun Hue stopped moving and stayed alert. They saw something moving on the large bushes just in front of them and they began to step away from it. They walked backwards and side by side until something went out from the bushes, making them scream.

                “AHHHHHH!!!” They screamed and hugged each other at the same time, feeling terrifie

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.