Rivalry

Boys Over Flower 2
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“Hah! Trust me, I knew her too well.” So Hyun declared, staring fiercely at Yoo Jung’s direction.

Almost all the students in the hallway were looking at them now. They were wondering what the reason was that the most popular students at U.K were gathering just outside the Class 2 class room. They also noticed that there was some tension going on between So Hyun and Yoo Jung and they decided to observe more about their rivalry.

                “Yoo Jung-ah, what is it? Do you know these transfer students?” Sae Ron asked.

                “I.. That is..” Yoo Jung was feeling sick all over again.

                “Yah, what happened to you? You look terrible.” Sung Jae commented and came to help her.

                “Sae Ron-ah, what happened? Is Yoo Jung sick?” Joo Hyuk asked, coming over to their side too.

                “Yeah. She was sick since this morning so the teacher told her to rest in the infirmary. But when I came to check on her a while ago, she told me that she felt much better and decided to attend the remaining classes.” Sae Ron explained and struggled on the limped body of Yoo Jung.

                “We should bring her back to the infirmary.” Sung Jae exclaimed.

Joo Hyuk started to lift Yoo Jung up on his back while Sung Jae and Sae Ron helped him. When Joo Hyuk was about to walk, Yoo Jung grabbed his shoulders, signalling him to stop and Joo Hyuk wondered what Yoo jung was up until they all saw Yoo Jung lifting up her face to look at So Hyun’s direction.

                “So Hyun-ah.. I..” Yoo Jung started to say weakly.

                “Don’t.”So Hyun demanded. “Just stop. I don’t want to hear anything from you.” So Hyun finished.

Everyone gasped, shocked to what they have seen. Students started to murmur and glared at So Hyun scornfully. Even Sae Ron, Sung Jae and Joo Hyuk were surprised by her cold treatment to Yoo Jung but So Hyun didn’t care. She just walked past them and went out from the school building, Sung Kyoung following her from behind.

                “Did you just see that? Gu So Hyun sure is mean.”

                “Just like her father from what I heard. They only use their power to manipulate and hurt other people.”

                “Poor Yoo Jung. What did she do that she got treated like that by that So Hyun?”

                “So Hyun and her F4 friends shouldn’t be here. They would only make us suffer.”

                “We should just stop them ourselves, right?”

So Hyun and Sung Kyoung could hear all sorts of criticisms against them but just ignored them while Sung Kyoung was still chasing after her friend while glaring at the students she met on her way. Finally So Hyun stopped walking and arrived at an empty school playground.

                “Yah, Gu So Hyun. What just happened between you and that sick girl?” Sung Kyoung asked.

                “That sick girl was the one I told you about. The girl Sung Jae and I grew up with in America.” So Hyun answered.

                “Oh! That ?” Sung Kyoung exclaimed.

                “God! Why is she here? I thought she was still living in America? Of all the schools, why did I end up studying with that.. that.” So Hyun was so frustrated.

                “?” Sung Kyoung finished for her. “But her face sure shows the opposite. Although I can still smell the stink coming from a manipulative and two-faced WITCH she really is.” Sung Kyoung stated.

                “What should we do? Because of me all the students think that we’re the witch. I involved you into my own problem with my old nemesis.” So Hyun felt sorry for her friends.

                “Forget it. I’m more than enough to handle those bastards. Just watch out for yourself.” Sung Kyoung warned.

                “I should be saying that to you. I believe you’re classmates with that pretender.” So Hyun countered.

                “Hah! It’s not me that you should worry about. It’s her.” Sung Kyoung stated confidently.

                “Why would I worry about her? She’s not my friend. You are. Just.. Just be careful okay? Don’t let her fool you or everyone else.” So Hyun reminded and Sung Kyoung just nodded. “Let’s go back to class for now.” She decided.

They have gone back to their classes while Joo Hyuk, Sae Ron and Sung Jae were still in the infirmary and waiting for Yoo Jung to wake up. After So Hyun has stormed off, Yoo Jung suddenly fainted and they brought her to the infirmary immediately. Sae Ron was sitting on a chair at Yoo Jung right side while Sung Jae was sitting on a chair at the left side. Joo Hyuk on the other hand was standing just beside Sae Ron.

                “So, you’re childhood friends but why did So Hyun and Yoo Jung fell out of friendship?” Joo hyuk asked after hearing about them being childhood friends.

                “I’m not so sure, but all I know is that they got into some misunderstanding.” Sung Jae answered.

                “Yeah right! But clearly, it wasn’t Yoo Jung’s fault.” Sae Ron concluded.

                “And clearly, you don’t know exactly what happened so you don’t have the right to judge anyone.” Sung Jae countered, glaring at Sae Ron accusingly.

                “Didn’t you just see what happened back there? Yoo Jung was trying to talk to her and your friend just ignored her. I’m guessing that your friend’s the unforgiving one. She sure holds her grudge for a long time.” Sae Ron noted.

                “Sae Ron-ah, you shouldn’t talk like that. Sung Jae’s right. We don’t know exactly what happened between them and clearly, your judgement is clouded because you’re worried for Yoo Jung, that’s all.” Joo Hyuk said, silencing her.

                “Why do you care for So Hyun so much as to defending her? What happened exactly last night between you two?” Sung Jae suddenly asked, making them flinched.

                “What is he talking about, Joo Hyuk-ah?” Sae Ron suddenly asked, alarmed.

                “It’s not what you think Sae Ron-ah. I was just helping her. She lost her way last night so I escorted her to the girls’ dormitories.” Joo Hyuk explained immediately, looking at her reaction.

                “Tsk. Really now? You know what? I’m out of here. Just inform me if Yoo Jung wakes up.” Sung Jae turned to go out of the room but he looked back at Joo Hyuk again. “I’m watching you. Like a HAWK.” He warned and leaved.

                “What was that about?” Sae Ron asked.

                “I’m not quite sure myself.” Joo Hyuk answered, confused.

It was still 3 o’clock in the afternoon but classes have ended early because of the teacher’s meeting. Some of the students started to get home while the others have gone out with their friends to have some fun.  As soon as the teacher had gone out, Bobby got up, dragging Jun Hue with him and approached Hayi to her seat. Bobby saw that the boy sitting beside her was starting to have another conversation with Hayi.

                “Hey, what’s up?” Bobby interrupted their conversation.

                “Oh, it’s you.” Hayi looked up to see Bobby look

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.