51st shot pt. 5

51st Shot
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Tiffany has been dating Hyuk Soo for a week  now and Taeyeon cannot do anything about it other than to let her 4 ghost friends stalk the two on their dates and report everything to her.

 

It was Sunday and a Sundate for Tiffany and her guy. The 4 ghosts were tagging along the two who was acting so chummy as they entered a coffee shop.

 

“I’m cringing.” Yul said as she shuddered

 

“The guy looks okay.” Yoong said as she continued eyeing Tiffany’s skirt

 

“I don’t trust that guy.” Sooyoung said “I sense negativity the moment I saw him outside the restaurant. He looks like he was planning something.” 

 

“Let’s get inside too and investigate, this is a new case to solve..” Hyoyeon pertaining to the two who went already inside the coffee shop

 

“A case? Who are you Nancy Drew?”

 

“No, she is Nancy Drool.”

 

“ please, I was a police woman during my past life. I solved cases after case.”

 

“Well, have you caught this e maniac before?” Sooyoung looked at Yoong as the latter is eyeing for girls skirts

 

“I only appreciate all living creature, shut the  up flag pole!”

 

“How can we get through? We can’t open the door!” Yuri frantically asked in panic

 

“Idiot, we can pass through walls. Duh~” Sooyoung said

 

“Right. Let’s do this !”

 

The 4 ghost saw the two couple sitted closely together at the coffee shop taking selfies together.

 

“Oppa, my face looks big here!” Tiffany whined and showed her aegyo.

 

“You’re still pretty my yeppeun pany!” Hyuk Soo said and pinched Tiffany’s chin

 

“What a sweet talker. Anyway what do you like to order oppa?”

 

“I would like to order but I left my wallet at home.” Hyuk Soo pouted

 

“It’s okay oppa, I will pay!” Tiffany smiled at him

 

‘What the ? That’s a turn off!’ Sooyoung commented

 

‘He committed a deadly dating crime for being cheap.’ Yoong said and the four continued to observe the two

 

“Really? Thank you Pany!” The guy looks happy and ordered a lot of food in the menu which Tiffany doesn’t mind at all. Money has never been an issue for her. So as long as her boyfie is happy, it is all worth it, she thought.

 

‘Is she stupid or something?’ Yuri dryly stated

 

‘I don’t know, maybe she left her brain on her restau.’ Sooyoung said

 

‘Guys, would you like to trip?’ Hyoyeon asked with a playful grin

 

‘You don’t say?’ The three approved and Sooyoung winked at Hyoyeon as a go signal

 

Hyoyeon approached the boy and whispered something on his ears the moment his order arrived. The guy just look at his food dejectedly.

 

“Oppa, what’s wrong?” Tiffany asked worriedly

 

“Can we just take the cakes out?” The guy said “I-I didn’t know it’s cold here!” The guy giggled awkwardly and zip up his jacket

 

'What did you whisper to him?' Yuri asked Hyoyeon in pure curiosity

 

'How many calories does a cake have.'

 

'That’s not scary.' Sooyoung said

 

'Well, if you’re a glutton like Choi Sooyoung during her past life, it won’t be scary.'

 

“Ah, right. We’ve been dating for awhile now but I forgot to ask you. What do you do? Do you work oppa?” Tiffany asked as she cut the cake using her fork.

 

“I am a stage play actor.” The guy said proudly

 

“Oh, no wonder you’re handsome!” Tiffany swooned over the guy

 

'Guys, I need to vomit. I can’t take this bull anymore.' Yoong face-palmed

 

“Do you live alone oppa?”

 

“I live with my mom, but she’s in the hospital right now.” Suddenly the guy burst into tears

 

“O-Oppa… Why are you crying?” Tiffany asked in panic as she quickly moved to her boyfriend’s side and pat his back, trying to comfort the latter.

 

She used to be someone who didn’t know how to comfort someone else but Taeyeon taught her. She saw how Taeyeon comforted her when she was down, and she liked it. So one day she tried to copy the latter when she saw Taeyeon sad. And it seemed work because Taeyeon could smile again. So start from that day, she always tried to comfort the younger whenever she’s sad or look so troubled. And now she’s getting better at it.

 

“Tiffany, umma is terribly sick. Dad left us when I was 7. I have no one with me. My mom is all I have now. I have to pay for her hospital bills but I have no money. Could you please... lend me some?” Hyuk Soo said as he stared on Tiffany with a puppy eyes

 

“O-Okay oppa. If you want, I can go there to the hospital and settle the bill myself.” Tiffany suggested

 

“NOOO!... I-I mean… I don’t want to burden you and waste your time. Just give me the money and I will pay it. Besides the hospital is not in the city, it’s quite far from here.”

 

“Okay then. I’ll transfer it on your account.”

 

“When?” The guy excitedly asked

 

“After our date.”

 

“Can it be now? I have to meet dad at 7 so he can pay the bill for umma. Have to go to the hospital quickly. I want to see mom.”

 

“I thought your dad left you when you were seven and your mother is all you have now?”

 

“U-Uh… You must have misheard me! I told you my dad was unemployed and have no money too. So we both don’t have enough money for umma. I can’t rely on him.”

 

“Oh, is that so oppa? I will transfer it now.” Tiffany uses her phone to online transferred

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UndefinedCharacter
#1
Chapter 8: The 51st shot is like breaking her belief that that person will be her special someone. It's cute!
Nice story! It's funny and at the same time heartwarming. I love the ghost friends!
UndefinedCharacter
#2
Chapter 6: Sam Ting Wong is really wrong! These ghosts friends are so fun!
UndefinedCharacter
#3
Chapter 4: The ghosts and Taeyeon's interaction is so funny!
NekoLS #4
Chapter 9: Mischief prankster SHYY surely epic hahahahaha
Etincelle #5
Chapter 8: omg i want a sequel author 😭
KSensei #6
Rereading this <3
_Diadora_
#7
Chapter 5: Yoong is seriously and totally a mood?
_Diadora_
#8
Chapter 4: Hyuksoo, the only guy i ship(as close friends) Tiffany with cause i watched that snl video god knows how many times and everytime Fany is gorgeous<3
zero309
#9
Chapter 8: This is amazingly cute and adorable... Taeyeon is really a sweetheart. The ghosts makes this story more colourful... It's fun... ^^
Mihyun101 #10
Chapter 8: ITS THE END ALREADY? OH MY GOD NOOOOOO