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Kibum heard that the owner of the new coffee shop was good looking so he makes it as his new hangout place to find inspiration. Will he find inspiration or answers to the question he never dared to asked?

 

A story about a man who cannot forget his past and a man who doesn't remember a part of his past.

Foreword

i hope you'll like it, though i may not be able to update always, i hope you'll be patient hehe. i somehow got the inspiration from Goblin, but i changed a lot of things from the first plot that i have planned to write. hehehe. also sorry for very short chapters, like not even 1k words, i am not really good with words and not confident with my grammar. hahaha. Also, i don't have time to proofread my works, i hope you understand and help me to get better. :)

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RAINeeKey #1
Chapter 4: Omg what will happen next I'm so curious!! Now I already read this, I can't wait to read more of this.Please update this more often ;;; I like it!! Btw I have a question, why did jinki shocked when he first saw kibum? Did he saw jjong in kibum or what?? I love kibum's chrcter here and for jinki I will love him once he love kibum hehe
Cereal_Shipper #2
Chapter 4: Yey, update ! :D Thanks author-nim !
Jinki asking Kibum to go to the convention with him... Kinda looks like a date, hehe
Jealous Kibum ! :O
Aw :( I feel sad for him... He doesn't know anything about Jinki... Jinki, why are you so secretive ? Is it because of Jonghyun ? I hope he talks to Kibum more

Oh ! The onkey moment ! *w* airport onkey never disappoints
SHINeeMe08 #3
Chapter 3: OnKey are so cute^^..!
Cereal_Shipper #4
Chapter 3: Yeey ! :D More onkey interactions !
Poor Kibum-ah, he fell asleep... But Jinki woke him up, hehe ~
For a second I really thought Jinki would leave him there in the rain :')
Now that he knows Jinki is the owner... Will Kibum come more often ? :O
I know you think you're not good at conveying emotions and stuff but you'll get better with time ! The more you write the better you'll get ~
Can't wait for the next chapter :D will it be Jinki's POV next time ? Hmm... I wonder what will happen...
SHINeeMe08 #5
Chapter 2: Oh this is sad...Jonghyun died...woah,onew meet Key already:D
SHINeeMe08 #6
Chapter 1: Woah!!!This is nice^^cant wait for the next chapter..I love OnKey<3
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 2: Oohh, so Kibum is Jonghyun's reincarnation ?
Poor Jinki, he misses him so much :(
I hope he'll start composing again ❤
"Not to see Jonghyun cry again" Well, good luck with that ! It's Jonghyun we're talking about !
If Kibum really was Jonghyun in a pastlife, then how do we explain the moment that he doesn't remember ? And is Jinki even a human being or is he something else like a Goblin ? Because he spotted Kibum !
I really need to upgrade my theory

Thank you for the quick update ! :D But now I want more though... (I'm greedy, I know) This story is intriguing... I want more, author-nim ! Please :'(
Cereal_Shipper #8
Chapter 1: This is such a good start ! :D I can't wait for the next chapter ~
You said this was inspired by Goblin ? Hmm... Then is it possible that Jinki and Kibum had met before ?! And Kibum had forgotten everything about him just like Eun Tak had forgotten about Kim Shin after she had removed the sword... I don't know if I'm right but it's my theory anyway ! :D
I'm craving more onkey interactions ♥ please, update soon, author-nim ! :D
Also, you should be more confident with your grammar skills ! You're not bad at all, it's quite good, actually ! I've seen way worse. Take it from me (although my grammar isn't perfect either since English isn't my first language), don't let things like that stop you !
Anyway, I'm really curious about what will happen next ! :D
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