Chapter 1: and ofc the book Jun read is the one Yifan authored under s pseudonym!!! i knew it!

this story is as sweet as Jun's baked goods! i love how it's simple love story but it's still very sweet, not to a point where it's cringe-y, so it's a really really nice read... i also really loved the various French words you put here, and to actually find out what they meant and why things were named such... very well played! HAHA
thank you so much for participating in the 100xover fest!

belated Merry Christmas and advance Happy 2017 Mei! :)))

Chapter 1: this was easiest to guess for me, but i already told you that... HAHAHA i would like to apologize coz i took so long to comment coz life! but here i am!

ahhhh Paris, the city of love... funny how in the midst of all the supposed romanticism, Yifan's run out of inspiration to write... but maybe he was in such a block coz he isn't personally inspired at the time? he's missing romance in his life that he can't write abt it? coz he started pretty well after his date with Jun... but it's too early to go there yet, my comment's just starting!

i think Jongdae played an all important role in the two's love story... had it not been for Jongdae's observation then jeering to Yifan for him to actually take action, who knows til when would've Yifan been just hopelessly staring from Cafe Centaine across Gardien

i think Yifan fared well in his approach with Jun, if the subtle flirting they did on the first time they talked to each other implied anything... he managed to continue having small convo with Jun by asking for a new flavor of cake everyday! wise move Yifan! tho i feel like Jun could've kept the small talk going, if he wanted too, with Yifan giving extra effort coz it's in his personality... *specially if he was interested in Yifan already don't you think? wink wink*

so whether it was actually in Jun's intention to drop the hint on Yifan to take him out on a date when he gave him that cake with the Eiffel Tower topper, im just glad the date happened!

thank you for touring us around Paris as well!!! i searched the places they went to as i read this again! and im so glad they were at a point where they're comfortable already with each other so they weren't all fumbling and stuttering during the very important first date! and seeing how it went so well, a second date is necessary!!!

AND OFC JUN DOESNT KISS ON THE FIRST DATE! HE JUST DOES WHEN HE'S SURE ABT THE PERSON!!! DAMN YES HES SURE ABT YIFAN!!! and they're holding hands as the day ends... /creys

Chapter 1: This was fantastic, and freaking cute. I love baker!Suho, he's so cute, and author!Yifan is great too.

Chapter 1: love this! you make everything in the story looks beautiful and delicious hahaha! i love junmyeon's character here.. i love that he's the one who kiss yifan first.

Chapter 1: another masterpiece T T
this was too good T T

Chapter 1: Wow this story was great and clever with the French terms. The double meaning in the title makes me like the story even more. Reading about Yifan consumption of pastries left me craving cake haha.

I'm read this in 100xover fest. This is so cute and cheesy I'm cackling

Chapter 1: Waaah this is so cute! I'm slowly catching up on the 100xoverfest stories :) I really enjoyed this! (Also this story has both coffee and cream in it hehe). They're so sweet and Yifan tries /so/ hard to get Junmyeon's attention; his shyness is pretty dang relatable. Great job!