my heart in your hands (take it, it's yours)

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it's 1986 and hanbin's drunk on young love. he isn't the only one.

 

 

Foreword

 
Image result for kim hanbin icons Image result for lee hi icons Image result for jaewon icons
 
hanbin was soccer shoes, morning blues and did everything half-assed. meanwhile hayi was pretty voice, charming smile and a face that never got out of style. neighbors since young, friends not too long ago - hanbin found solace in the existence of hayi soon after and what happens next is what you'll find out. 
 

 

author's note: made because i found this old story i wrote a long time ago, and it's actually kind of tragic so i revised the plot a little and the characters (it was originally written for sujeong/taehyung/jimin) and voila. here i am, this will be a short story in between 7 to 10 chapters and i hope you guys will comment your thoughts and just anything. <3 
 
 
 
 
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glittergold #1
Chapter 5: Why did I just find this fic right now? it's super good. will you update the story authornim??
suburbia #2
Chapter 3: hanbin and jaewon: the true couple
upgrader #3
Chapter 5: omg hanbin is so sweet and cute I really love him in this (and everyone else tbh). I'm excited to see where this thing with jenny goes!
upgrader #4
Chapter 4: I'm re-reading this instead of writing my term paper lol! I really love this story. The way you write is so deliberate, dainty, and nostalgic. I love the relationships between the characters, but I'd love to learn more about Hayi and see how you flesh her out more as a character instead of an object of affection. So excited to see where you go with this!
donggu #5
Chapter 4: i am back again to comment because honestly you just deserve a lot of love, okay?? Okay. (Wait this isn' the fault in our stars)
Anyways I really love this. I love it a lot. your writing flows so well and reading this feels so light and effortless (and yes sometimes it can be a struggle to read stories). The scenes are short and to the point yet you can easily grasp onto each character and who they are and what they are feeling etc. it's so refreshing to read something so simplistically beautiful. I've been scouring everywhere for good quality writing (cause i'm supremely picky SMH) and i'm thankful that your writing style is lovely and that your plot is intriguing. THANK YOU I'VE REALLY BEEN NEEDING THIS!
I am more than satisfied to see how things turned out with Jiwon (I KNEW THE GUY WAS A BASTARD I KNEW IT). i LOVE LOVE LOVE THE TRIO and their close friendship. I love Hanbin and how much he loves Hayi, I love Jaewon and his protectiveness (not a word oops), I love Hayi who is cheerful and strong, I love Jinhwan that's the voice of reason, the guy that knows everything. I love how this all reflects real life yet it's written so poetically so that it makes reality seem a bit...deeper(???) IDK how to word it oops.
BUT honestly i really do love the trio the most. It makes me wish that I had a trio of my own, to have friends that guide and care for you every step of the way.
oh god i think i wrote too much. now i'm just rambling. But honestly i'm just really happy this story and ur writing exists and i'm anticipating more. what happened to chaerin? What happened between her and jaewon??? will jaewon fall for hayi?? and what about hanbin's feelings?? and what is hayi really feeling inside??
as always, i'll await your update. please take your time and sorry for writing this long message. i get too passionate haha
Epikcry #6
Chapter 4: im actually a onehi shipper after My Star so your love triangle idea is gonna tear me apart.

Also what happened to Chaerin in this story? are we meant to know or is it an important point later
xNarya #7
Chapter 4: Omg ! Honestly I like HanHi but I am rooting for Jaewon if the trio is going to broke this unspoken promess of friendship. And also because of the lacking of OneHi fanfics ahahah ! Thank you for the update ~
animetanaka #8
Chapter 3: I binge read all your chapters and I cannot contain my glee. I love how you write! It really does feel like an innocent love. And the relationship between the three friends are so precious.
IM_Hyolyn #9
Chapter 1: I love the way you writing. I'm waiting for next chap! Fighting~ ^^
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