Heaven

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Hey! So this is my first fanfic ever. It's going to be a compilation of EXO members one-shots. Though english isn't my motherlanguage but i'll try hard to present you with mistake free one-shots. 

Foreword

For all the EXO-Ls around the World and those who love EXO with all their might, here is Heaven.

Every chapter Will be about one of the members.

Let's not forget our cheer WE ARE ONE SARANGHAJA.

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VIPMuse #1
yaaaaaaaaaa! I want my Xiumin one shot !!! I can't wait anymore it's too much >_<
notice me jebal :'(
and don't mind grammar... I don't really care as long as it's cute!
DarkJustice #2
Chapter 2: Thunder boy !! Are u kidding mee!!! So fricking adorable!!! You have potential to write! Just try not to make grammatical mistakes, n I'm not good at grammer. I loved this! And am waiting for the HAWAII ONE !
DarkJustice #3
Chapter 1: Asdfghhk this is so cute! Arghhhh!!! I want moreeeeeeeee
Kathys #4
Chapter 2: The ending was just as cute as the beginning, although sometimes it was too quick for me but it was okay for a one-shot though. :) Do you mind if I point out some things that you could improve? Just as a friends of course, I don't mean to correct you or anything. Sometimes you write 'u' instead of 'you' which is not pretty, it's sleng, also you randomly write some word with a capital like I wish I Could or in the Morning. Are perhaps German? Because I know they write nouns in capitals. Also you switch between "" and - when it comes to speaking. Anyway, it was still nice reading it, hwaiting! I'll be waiting for more. ^^
VIPMuse #5
Chapter 2: It feels so real that I wonder if it was actually the case ... keep it up authoronim~ fighting!!
Aw...
And what's with Fin? You mean END, right? XD
Kathys #6
Chapter 1: Aww, it's so cute! ^^ Also, evn though sometimes you mixed up present and past tensed I wouldn't have guessed English is not your mother language. You're doing well. I'll definitely cheer for you and waiting for you new one-shots. I love these shy awkward but cute puppy loves like in this one :)
VIPMuse #7
Chapter 1: Thank u authoronim that was great <3 (a bit too innocent but who cares XD)
Now I want Xiumin :'( update soon please.
VIPMuse #8
update! update! hahaha :3
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