Path

Warriors Against the Darkness
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As soon as he left the meeting, Yoongi began heading back to his room. He didn't want anything to do with Jimin. He could still remember the other man's stoic face when Yoongi got beaten up in high school, not lifting a finger to help him, when he obviously needed a friend. He didn't see anything good in Jimin, so he couldn't imagine why he was a part of this. He would have to trust him with his life, and that would be very difficult for him. Laughing to himself, he tried to gather his wits again. He could run from this, but that would land him in prison...and that would be much worse than working with someone he hated.

 

When he was almost to his bedroom, Yoongi heard a soft voice speaking. "Hey, are you scared? How are we supposed to fight this...whatever it is?" Yoongi swore under his breath, cursing himself. When Yoongi turned around, he saw that the person speaking was a teenager. Why the hell would the government have pulled a teen into this? "I'm sorry. What was that?"

 

The young man bit his lip, shaking his head. "Nevermind. It's a stupid question.Obviously we just fight it," the teen laughed quietly to himself, and Yoongi could see the fear and uncertainty in his eyes. The young man smiled again and began to turn away from him.

 

Yoongi sighed deeply, leaning against the wall. "This all seems crazy, but I guess The Eternal Source thinks we can defeat whatever this Void is. If it was too hard, we wouldn't have been given this mission, right? That's what this is. We're the lucky ones," he added with a grin, noticing with relief that the teen smiled back at him. He felt a strong urge to protect him, since he was young, even though he didn't know the kid. "Um, my name's Yoongi. If you need to talk, I can try to be here for you."

 

The teen smiled again, and this time it reached his eyes. "That's good advice, Yoongi. You're right about us sticking together and relying on each other. My name's Jungkook, and it's nice to meet you."

 

Yoongi nodded again, glad that he had been able to ease the teen's mind. "We'll learn about this together and try to make everything right." He laughed, wanted to slap himself. "And it's nice to meet you, too, Jungkook. You have really good English. Are you from here?"

 

Jungkook nodded. "Yeah. I'm from California. It'll be really cool when we get weapons to defeat this..." He cursed under his breath. "What did she call it?"

 

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peggyw #1
Chapter 6: Unique and entertaining story. Sad it ended with betrayal and death.
Sasha-exo_l #2
Very nicely done, though.
-Tigress- #3
Chapter 6: OMG YOU BROKE MY HEART WHYYYYYY!!!!! T.T
Very nicely done, though. I really liked how you pulled Fate into it haha (I miss Fate) and I did NOT expect that betrayal. My goodness. Yoongi was written really well, I liked how the reader could identify with him. The care you showed from him for Jungkook was great, too, because you get the feeling that there is true cost to winning this. I am really satisfied witht he ending, though it did hurt OMG WHYYYYYY but in all this was a really good read. Good luck in the contest, fighitng!!!
-Tigress- #4
You finished it! Congratulations my dear!!! ♡♡♡ I'm very proud of you and I look forward to reading it!!!
Amalya #5
Chapter 4: Well this is certainly an interesting start here. I like how the characters tend to interact, and I'm admittedly happy the story is following Yoongi for the moment. haha You certainly have an interesting enemy in the Void as well. I'm not sure what I'm looking for yet, other than a powerful force against them, and the potential minions it might manifest, like seen in this chapter. Yoongi's protective reaction towards Jungkook is quite endearing and sweet, though I'm curious as to how things got so twisted between him and Jimin. I mean, you do mention it, but this level of animosity makes it seem like there's something more going on. >.> At least Namjoon is there to help keep them in line and attempting to work together until this mess can be figured out between them.

I'm a bit surprised that they were chosen at random though. My inclination is to think that is only what they are being told and that there's something otherwise special about them. Why else would seven young men who have little to no training be chosen to save the world, after all? I will say I'm having a hard time keeping track of time here. I believe a month was mentioned before they were going to leave or need to be at the first portal, as it were, but I don't really have a feel for just how much time is going by. That doesn't seem like a lot of time to allow them to learn their weapons and the teamwork necessary to fight what they're up against. Maybe I'm missing something, but that stood out to me is all.

Otherwise, I'm definitely curious to see what they're going to run into on their way to the next part. I'm definitely suspicious that there was a sign for them and a place just laid out for them to rest after they got to the first point. haha Maybe there's much more going on than I can see at the moment. haha Keep up the good work though, and good luck with the rest of it!
-Tigress- #6
Haha as soon as I saw this prompt I thought it looked like something you would want to write! Good luck with it!
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