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Did you ever wonder how it would be like to live and die everyday ? To be alive yet feel dead .. To live your life , condemned to a fate worse than death .. Did you ?

 

If so , I might be the best one to tell you how it feels like .

In every painful detail .

 
 
 

Foreword

 

 

 

 

A struggle .. A struggle to survive , waiting for happiness to pay him a visit .. But .. What if he couldn't make it when happiness finally knocks on the door ? What if he couldn't answer in time ? Would happiness insist ? Knock some more ? Wait for him ? Or would it leave and mock him ?

 
 
 
 

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byungtokki #1
Chapter 6: wow... I like it. the edited version is much better.
it provides more details for me to visualise the scenes better.
good job unnie! well you never fail to amaze me every time.
and good luck for your exams!! I'll be right here waiting for you to come back~
and I am also bracing myself for your tragic ending *excitedly fidgets in my seat with clenched fists* am so excited!!! can't wait for your return!
till then, all the best unnie!
meyrall
#2
Chapter 5: This is much more sadden than the previous one!!! I love the ending so much though it hurts me to imagine byungie's death and channie was mourning his coarpse
byungtokki #3
Chapter 5: wow that escalated quickly....
personally for someone who has always been reading your detailed scenes I felt like this one was kinda rushed? I didn't feel the angst that much this chapter. the death was a little too sudden.
but still the leaving without a goodbye part hit me hard. I'm not sure if you've seen articles about ljoe leaving without telling s. he never said goodbye....
meyrall
#4
Chapter 5: the ending was so sad T_T
poor chunji finding byunghun dead body beside him. i can feel him.
meyrall
#5
Chapter 4: Auw so sweet...
Love the passion on the kiss.. at leasr byunghun could handle it and you describe their emotions so well..love it & tq
byungtokki #6
Chapter 4: of course one scene chapters is a talent. not many can execute it well but yours are always amazing. always enough to paint the picture yet short enough to keep readers at the edge of their seats wanting for more.
some one scened chapters can get quite redundant or empty but yours are always just right. so I'd say it's a talent!
I like how chanhee is so patient and reasons with byunghun so well. even I am sold haha!
will chanhee get carried away in a moment of lust? I'd say yes because when lust overpowers your mind anything can happen. but as for whether byunghun's heart will take it, isn't that up to you unnie *winks*
byungtokki #7
Chapter 3: it's short but it's a good chapter. I personally liked it. Out of all your fics so far this one is actually my favourite. somehow it triggers a lot of emotions in me, bringing out my masochist side maybe haha.
Byunghun, aren't you a little too sensitive. Chanhee just wants to best for you. *shakes my head*
Poor Chanhee :(
meyrall
#8
Chapter 3: Quite short but its ok
I like it so far
The agstiness...i can feel it. I can understand how they feel. Byunghun and chanhee..oh my, they have suffered a lot!
byungtokki #9
Chapter 2: ack okay I don't even know where to start but it's a little too short of a chapter but that's alright it keeps the readers craving ooOooooOoo.
byunghun's insecurity gah *takes byung byung and hugs him* the last part when he said chanhee shouldn't have to keep fixing a broken doll got to me because I know how he feels T.T
okay I can't wait for more fighting unnie!!!
byungtokki #10
you are right, I do think I am masochist too now that I'm reading this and enjoying this so much.
but why must you leave us with such a cliffhanger omf my heart was beating faster and faster and suddenly *end of chapter* and I'm like oh my gosh nooooooo hahahahaha
really really liking this so far. good job!!!