Mochi Mochi Review [Closed]
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The same shallow feed back from everyone about grammar?
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Status:
Open :||: Closed :||: Busy
:||: Important Upadates :||: (at the moment)
Foreword
1) Please be patient.
2) We don't take M rated for (language is okay ^^).
3) No or yuri.
4) If the fanfic is too long, we will read up one third of it (unless we are really that into it).
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6) Notify us ASAP if you would like to decline your request.
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:||: Title: -/5 :||:
Was it eye catching? Cliché? Simple? Boring? Did it make an impact?
:||: Description/Foreword: -/10 :||:
Insight to plot? Capture the reader’s attention? Did it leave us pleading for more?
:||: Story Flow: -/20 :||:
The pace (was it too slow too fast?) Did it make sense? Was there a nice flow of the story and added up to the next or previous chapter?
:||: Character Development: -/15 :||:
Did we see your character grow into who she is at the end of the fanfic? Or was she bipolar, changing from one mood to another without much reason. Was there originality in your character?
:||: Formal Language: -/15 :||:
Spelling? Vocabulary? Grammar?
:||: Originality: -/15 :||:
Was it cliché with your own twist? Did it resemble any movies/fanfics/stories just a little too much? Was it never been done before sort of fanfic?
:||: Overall Enjoyment: -/20 :||:
Did we want to subscribe? Were we kept interested or frustrated? Did we want more? Or did we want to end it from the foreword?
:||: Comment :||:
We have two reviewers and that would be:
my-flaming-charisma
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Chapter 2
Chapter 3
fizz-peaze
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Chapter 4
Please check chapter one for status
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